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for His end as a single

by Suryallee7104

person Ana
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED HOW YOU HAD THE GIRLS TOGETHER AND THE BOYS TOGETHER!!!!!!! REALLY GREAT STORY!!!!
person spiritwolf
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well this was ok well I only liked the first chapter because it was dealing with the girls and I thought that was the best part of the story well to me I think it would have been alot better if kept the first chapter the same and the other chapters having Yusuke go back to the temple and have sex with all the girls but thats what I think would make the story better other than that chapter one was the only good part in this story.
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This wasn't bad for someone who has only spoken English for about a year. <3
person kit-kit
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved the final lemon
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Yusuke/Hiei lemons! But I guess it was Hiei/Yusuke this time! Oh Green Knight, I am going to post the story right after I update DMGs! Then I still have some beta work to wrap up!
person The Green Knight
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jovian, calm down... remember that Suryallee's busy and that this is her story. You could force her stop writing just as Altar stopped writing. I missed Altar... but she's tired of people forcing her into things she never meant to write! I'm having a hard time convincing her to post her brand new Kuwa-story because she says that it doesn't really have any pairings!

Oy Sury, Altar tells me that you've been to ASp. I'm there too, but I hardly ever visit 'cause of the fanbrats and stuff. And man do they ever HATE Keiko and Kazuma over there!
person Altar of Wishes
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Sorry that I'm late. I was lying on the floor with a multitude of pain that continues this very morning. But just like Kazuma, I'm still there for everyone else. Speaking of the carrot-top... naughty Kurama and Hiei!
person JovianWolfGirl
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, loving this story! There all gonig to be togeother! Ha, that wonderfull! Update soon!
person Altar of Wishes (I live!)
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. That's all I have to say... so is this going to be a Hiei/Yusuke story? Or is it a lonely but funny one-shot?
person The Green Knight
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey you can call me GreenK-chan since I'm just 23. Hmm... Kurama knows how to get what he wants now doesn't he? Oh and I can't wait for Hiei to get his little hands on Yusuke!