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for Malice

by Saka

person Lady Baltimore
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Renair should have a birthday everyday. ^_~
person CrimsonFox
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's so cute and sweet that I almost don't want to see the abuse of the fanfic... but damn curiosity has me asking you to write more so I can see what happens.
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful lemon, I really enjoyed this one..

Loved how you portrayed Kurama in bed - especially when he licked Hiei's ear and said "My Turn". Nice. Too many good things to point out. All I can say is keep writing!
person MikaSamu
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great lemony beginning, with an ominous note of what is to come. I anxiously await more.
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, I enjoyed it greatly. Update soon please.