rate_review Reviews

that was awsome. i really enjoyed your story. hiei was always my favorite character. you rock so much its halarious!!!!!!!

I love this story. It is absolutetly the greatest Hiei/Keiko story that I have ever read. Yeah. Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating it here!! :)

I really love this fanfic. The way you went about your words and storyline was pure genius. I never thought I would like this pairing, but it is as if I could watch this story intertwined with the episodes as naturally as you made it. The imagery you used in this piece was amazing. However, with this last chapter, there are many a gramatical error!! I was just letting you know. Other than that, I simply adore this fanfiction.

Sincerely,
Sayge

i loved it alot! the true emotions that were displayed... very tasteful

A nice comment as in, UPDATE SOON OR I SWEAR SOMETHING BAD WILL HAPPEN? Well, yeah I love this story. Love the pairing. And it wasn't like Kieko just ditched Yuskue. Poor Hiei had to wait, but it was worth it!! I so can't wait for more!

O Wow! I LOVE IT!! The story is really original. I personally would have never thought that Hiei and Keiko would be together, but here I am proven wrong! And they truly make a wonderful couple. I can't wait to read more so please update soon!!!

Thought it was a great story. some of the grammar and spelling was off but l know english was not your frist lang. but its still good!! peace love and crabs and happy holidays!

I am your 2000th hit Sury-san! Your grammar is doing much better than I've seen before and as always, I'm proud of you (actually I look up to you)! This makes me want to write a sequel to trembling! I just got to know how to start it... *passes out*

Blushes furiosely!
Thanks, but I think the flowers belong, as always to my lovely Betas as such you are meant too!
Without your lovely help and your nice reviews I would never have gotten so far!
THANKS, TO TINA SAN, ALTAR SAN,( YES, YES, YES YOU TOO), AMANDA SAN, AND IN THE SHADOWS, FOR YOUR NICE HELP!!!
A very happy Suryallee
ps, you look up to me?????
I look up to YOU!!!

Oooo! Nice one! I just read the normal ff.net version and I must say I like this one better! That's a given though, right? Ahh, Isn't it nice to be able to give Hiei pleasure through writting? I'm even happier now! Maybe too happy... I should go calm down in a dark corner far away from any sign of life. *hugs Hiei plushie* ~grins devilishy~ I'm taking you with me...-_~ I like your art too! I just checked out your art account that you mentioned(right after I read the new chapter). I loved your nude pic of said koorime! *finds interest in the celing fan and wistles some random tune*hugs plushie tighter* I agree. The purple sheet does hide the best part! Err! Curses! And also, Hell! Why draw him topless when you can draw him completely clothesless! You should draw another one without the sheet. If you must hide his goods, use his hand. Oh well. Up to you. Hahaha!lol! I know, I'm very wierd. But everyone has a crazy side, don't they? Don't they?!?0_o? Mine chose tonight to visit... Ahh, the simple pleasures in life! Anyway, keep up the good work!

Poor Hiei plushie in my hands:.......*gulps* "......help me...please....PLEASE!!!!" >0<
Real Hiei:*sweatdrop* "Umm,...I'll send someone for you! Hold on!"*walks out of the room yelling: "KURAMA! NEED HELP!"

hieiyamimoya: hysterically laughs out loud!"How intertaining! Have a good one, Suryallee!"