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by CrimsonFox234

person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was about to dispair of you ever finishing this. I'm so glad you are because I just love it. I can't wait for them to finally get together. Update soon.
person Kurama_is_mine
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like it so far so i hope you update soon!
person moony_lex
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*smile* This turned out to be a rather sweet chapter. I like the way it's heading, can't wait to read the next. Btw, you're guilty of making me like this pairing, you know. Hm! *pout*
person KyoHana
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At last!! The two are finally talking!! Yes!

All I can say is that I loved this chapter. Seeing Hiei and Kurama together was terrific! I especially loved Hiei's little stutter when he asked if Kurama wanted to join him for dinner!
person ladywolfTerri
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's still going great!!! Be kind of sad if the next is the last chapter... but then I hate it when all good stories come to an end...^^;;..
person Lady Aqualyne
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG YAY FOR UPDATES! And AWWWWWWWWWWW this chapter was so CUTE! And funny... BUT SO CUTE! I can't wait to see what happens at the dinner. Thanks for updating and giving me something to smile about. I definately look forward to the next update.
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you updated. I'm really enjoying this story. I hope you have the next chapter up soon.
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**dances shamlessly** YOU UPDATED! YEA! I love your AUs. But really, Kurama should not sneak up on Hiei when he's holding a sword. I'm glad to see that they are finally working things out and that they're going to dinner with the rest of the crew (although I'm sure there will be teasing and commentary from Kuwabara and Yusuke).

Is there a lemon coming?
person Deannamay
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed your story. I like the stumbling way these two fell in love, not too sappy, but enough emotion to make it pleasing. Too bad you only have one more chapter, hope it is a long one.
person nytekit
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh look! It's an update! And a cute one at that! I really enjoyed this chapter. That whole section about Kurama's gift was just so great! Even with Kurama getting cute with the sword he bought it was still a great scene. And thanks to your previous chapter, I can imagine what Hiei looked like after that practice session. Also, I simply loved the earlier scene this chapter that Kurama and Hiei shared. That was just too cute reading about Kurama half seducing Hiei. I loved it!!!! Great job! Update soon!!!