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for Sterotypes

by CrimsonFox234

schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I have to wait?! ::Cries:: But But... I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! ::Sighs and plops down on the floor indian style with little tears in her eyes and gives her puppy eyes..:: We won't have to wait long right? ::Whimpers:: Right?????
person YuehKitsune
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*nods* thankyou! for not goin that far. I love if when they crossdress from time to time, but i hate it when they make Kurama more feminine than he actually is. *is thinking of Kurama in a chearleading outfit jumping around when a Hiei in shoulder pads looking like a little burly munchin runs around the field* I'm wondering about that hair though with the helmet, hmmm. good chapter, Hiei beats the wall and the punching bad i'm so glad! if you ever find that picture post the link in one of your furture chapters. the world needs another picture that will scarr us for life.

Yueh Kitsune
person jicky
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooh i wana read more >__
person jicky
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how come my review was cut... anyway...
wanted to say i like the bits of angsty feeling in this! also can't wait to rad when they get together~
person Renair (who is not sined in)
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT! Please write more! *is a deticated Maya basher* I love how the story is going, and can't weight to see how they hook up. It's a littel hard to tell who's speacking in some places, but other than that I love it. As I said, please write more!
person inumoon3
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON, I LOVE THIS FICCY! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
person D.S.
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I like this fic as much as your other ones! It's so true, which is what really gives your story emotion. I hope that you will update really soon so that I can find out what will happen next! Good luck and don't forget to update Model and the Bass too! I really like that one as well! So I hope that you will find it in your heart to update soon and save me from going insane! See ya!(If I don't go insane first that is)
person Tankar
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel a little akward since this is the 3rd story in a row I've reviewed and you authored them all. I guess its just how your stories are composed. In any case- I really enjoyed this so far as well. I must admit I don't like Kurama very much so far, I wonder if he atleast LIKES Hiei like... that.... even a little yet. Kusususu, he should join them in drinking some day- it might be neat. [ I in no way promote drugs or alcohol ] Hehe, in any case, I do hope you continue this as well, it must be difficult to juggle so many stories at once though. 'v' I'll have to add you to my favorites... hmm... *thinks*
person KitsuneDragon
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! Good job!! Update soon!!! 10/10

~KD~
person bob
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow hiei forgave kurama easily in that chapter....anyway i can't wait for more update soon. this is now my favorite fics of the ones you've written!!