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for Chocolate and Roses

by hColleen

schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why oh why would I flame you abou the odd pairing?

I look for those!!! Canons are great, but odd couples are always interesting, and this particularly, I loved it!!! I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^^
person LRH
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool
person NyteKit
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very delicious smut there. kind of an odd pairing, but i did enjoy it. you do write these scenes so beautifully vivid. keep it up!
person The Green Knight
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe.... that was fun! *gets out a sketchypad* Koenma and Yoko sitting in a tree, K-I... crud. I'm not going to finish typing that.
person vampslyr
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, I hope there's a sequel. I like the idea that Koenma was interested in having sex with Kurama (ch. 1) but needed someone to forcefully take control away so that he could relax and enjoy it. Youko mentioned in his thoughts that he already had Hiei and Yusuke. Is this story connected to one you already have, or in a stand alone universe?

Finished the beta and sent it to your gmail account. Let me know what you think of it.
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THat was just too hot!!! Excellent job!! Five stars!! Thank you for making this fic! Koenma does need more lovin! ^_^
person Eye of Ra
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heh. that was *quite* amusing. ^^ very entertaining. *giggles* i loved it. and i am very curious to see what you'll come up with for the second half. and i cant say anything... cause im doing a two part one right now myself. LoL. so yeh. ^^

later!
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... you weren't limited to what was on my list because those pairings listed were the ones that popped into my head. I try not to have too much Kurama/Yoko stuff because I'd rather swim against the current. Nothing wrong with him-- it's just that there's too much of him.

The story... *is stoic and scary-looking* no. Unacceptable. *turns into crazed puppy-eyed creature* We need a chapter before I go into cardiac arrest! Koenma's so ignored and nobody really touches on anything related to him! It's shameful I say!
person KuwaLove
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THat was hott! He really needs the love! He doesn't get enough, just like another person I know and love ^_^ (snickers). Anyway, that was defintly an odd, yet sexy pairing! I can't wait for the second part!! Update soon!!
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh soo evilllllll >.< don't stop here too long please!