AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Model and the Bass

by CrimsonFox234

person Annabel
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very awesome and funny so far. The sexual tension is so thick in the air, you could cut it with a knife! xD
person bob
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol that was funny kurama in a french maid outfit and i wouldn't stress too mych about keeping everyone IC you can try but you can't worry about it too much because you didn't make up the characters so they'll never be completely IC when you write them but yeah. i like this fic please continue!!!
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
French maid huh? Very sexy. I can't wait to read what Hiei puts him in next. I wonder if he knows he's playing into Kurama's kinky fanitasy, or maybe his own.
person Yit-Ha
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huni, you're leading up to a really hot scene here. Write more ASAP!
person Heero
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no! dont let it eeend ;.; please update soon your fics are so amazing!!!
person Everqueen
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man, is Toguro going to be pissed at Kurama. HEHE, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Great story.
person December Wind
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the way the fight turned out!
Wanted Kurama to win before I read this, but now, can't be happier~
I wonder what kind of slave Hiei has in mind...
I somehow DON'T wonder what kind of slave Kurama has in mind XD~
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Some how I think Kurama's going to get more than he bargened for in being Hiei's slave. I can't wait to hear about the clothes. Great chapter, Update soon.
person Mini
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow Hiei has kurama for a whole week wonder what he has in mind please update soon I'd really like to know.
person buenagirl
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG... this is good... Luv it... I hope that you don't take too long to update thought... ^_^