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for Model and the Bass

by CrimsonFox234

person Everqueen
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great wet dream. OMG, bunny ears. I can't wait to read that chapter rofl. Poor Kurama, Hiei is just embarrassing the heck outta him, but I get the feeling Kurama can take it, it's Hiei that is in way over his head.
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know which one of your stories I like best, but his one is pulling for the top spot. I like how their relationship is progressing - Hiei ia actually getting closer to Kurama despite himself. My favourite line was Hiei saying "No, I was dreaming of throwing you into oncoming traffic". I also like Hiei doing pushups with Kurama on his back, I did that for a guy in college once, it's pretty hot.

Your dialogue between the two is excellent, I really enjoy reading this story.

And *gulp* bunny ears? What's that about?
person bob
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol i luved that chapter please update soon!!!
person Annabel
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Bunny ears! Yooooou know what bunnies are famous for?! tehe! Update soon! ^^
person Jani
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story the whole idea of the meeting in the alley really tells why he is in love with Hiei. That fact that he admitted he loved him is great I can't wait to find out what Hiei thinks of this. The maid outfit is a great touch it shows Hiei's why of thinking, i wanna read to find out what other costumes he picks out. I always thougth Hiei would be good in a band.
person Liliath
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww....this is just so swee~~~~~~~t!!!!!!!!!^^ I totally adore and love this fic, you have to update, its tototally addictable!!^^
person Everqueen
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, Hiei was so sweet with giving Kurama his wallet like that. And the maid's outfit is just funny.
person bob
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww thats so cute kurama loves hiei, and that chapter was funny i couldn't stop laughing the whole time please continue and i'm glad i made u feel better, keep writing!!
person Kai
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is great!!!!! Please continue!!!!!
LOVE YA!!!!!
Kai
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much. And I think Kurama is just too cute, I don't care if he's out of character. That just makes it that much more fun. Update soon.