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for Model and the Bass

by CrimsonFox234

person chibi hentai
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it cut off my review! Damn site. what all else i said is that... eh... em... i can't remember >_< shit, me and my bad memory! well, i said basically that i really like this fic. And that i hope you have the next chapter writen since i got the impression you finish writing (at least) most of your fic before posting it. I also gave you an idea (though i don't know how far you've writen or if you're still looking for ideas) that rumors about Hiei and Kurama begin to circulate the tabloods and stir up a little angst between them. just my little idea, not expexting it to be used, lol. also, i hope for an update soon ^^

ja ne
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, really, what's the matter with Kurama? I'm curious...
I like how Hiei is finally warming up to him, buying him clothes and taking him out to dinner. It's very cute. The whole scene where Kurama's in the bedroom and Hiei's in the shower was hot - are they EVER going to hook up? Or is Hiei just too stubborn? (I hope not).

I really love this story - keep writing!
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG don't you dare stop writing this, I just love it. They were so cute together when Hiei was in the shower. Update soon.
person Everqueen
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEHE, school girl Kurama. Fun. Hiei I think is starting to feel bad that he forced Kurama to wear those clothes, so he got him the "guy" clothes. lol. I did like the bed scene with the tangled sheets. Great story so far.
person bob
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww man that sucks i don't like waiting i want to know what happens now!
person christine
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, good, I had to reread that for a second. COSTUME bunny ears, phew, at first I thought you were just really mean.


Mmm .. Kurama is yummy, and the French Maid outfit doesn't help out my hormone wiles one bit.


UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON.
person canis lupis
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg.............that so ruled!!!!! gotta love the bunny ears..... and hiei gets to be all macho!!! w00t! not to be a party pooper or anything....but i am just so proud of myself for knowing that they were defenitely not having sex. or maybe you just made it reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaally obvious. did you? crap...........and now i have nothing to boast for... oh, well. i can always just go back to telling everyone about how i finally figured out how to fold my mom's bath towels....... >.< write more soon, this is kick-ass!!!
person comicfancat
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an evil little fic but I really like it.Can only imagine what your going to do with bunny ears and can't wait to find out! please update sooon
person Ass
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story...Kurama is uke...right....................?
person DarkRoseDamael
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooh dear. i cant wait to find out what happends next this is such a great fic!