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for Model and the Bass

by CrimsonFox234

person tinyteeth
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank You!!!!!!! Finally ya updated. *Gasps for air* God next time I won't hold my breath. *Drags her somewhat affixated body in a corner to read new chapter*
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I AM SO GLAD YOU CONTINUED THIS! Ok, I'm calmer now.

I like the age difference, and I especially liked how you portrayed the "jagan/scar", very inventive. But you almost made me pee on myself (I said almost!) when Kieko said "Pretty boy love is hot!". Score 1 for rabod yaoi fangirls everywhere!

Great job, no need to explain things at the top the way you did - everything is well-written and fun to read.
person Tankar
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew it >.>; Kurama's in trouble isn't he? I knew it! XD I had one of those moments, 'cause when they were like "Shuichi!" and I was scrolling down, I said Uh-Oh outloud like a split second before I read it. It was kind of creepy :P

Yeah, Your stories are a little OOC, but sometimes thats ok... Especially in AU's <.< I really like this one ^^ Its cute... I'm a little critical on pairing them up with anyone but KuramaxHiei(or viseversa) But I guess if he doesn't LOVE Mukuro anymore... I mean... yeah... ><;

Once again, great story ^^ I wonder which one you'll update next...? As for writing yourself into a corner, you must be in a corner with a bunch of holes 'cause this is great ^^ Splendid 'v' Diggin' Yukina also, man. Keep up the fantabulous work i*L¤`*jƒm.
person Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In)
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY update!!!! I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens everytime I read a new chapter. Now to be perfectly honest... this chapter cracked me up. I almost fell out of my computer chair laughing three or four times at different things in it. The sardines thing was hilarious as was Hiei going "Kurama read my lips... illegal" oh oh and the comment on the correcting of the english cracked me up too. Okay I think I am done... yeah but those really had me laughing hard. I really enjoyed this chapter and I have a feeling that Kurama has a very pissed off manager about to ream him a new one. I can't wait to see what happens! Keep up the great work and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
person Shuichi Shindou
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So cute! Too bad hiei is trying to stick to its an illegal deal you can tell he loves him! ^^ keep writing I love it!
person christine
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I laughed so hard when I read the line about Hiei trying to 'get the horny boy off of him' bwahaha

great story, i lob joo.
person LoversPastForgotten(notloggedin)
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE! You have to update soon! Please!! I love your stories they're just so damn good! Update, lease! I'm begging you!
person Tankar
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Coolsies ^^ AUGH! I must know what under his bandana, now x_x; Just hope its not something crazy, like, oh... say... A third eye o.o; Lol, in any case, Hiei seems really loose in this story ^^ He sure talks alot! Not that thats bad or something, just saying... Its weird how Hiei can still go on saying that they can't be together, but he lets Kurama onslaught him with kisses (if only for a short while). Update soon, ne? ^^ I'm absorbed into this, Stereotypes, and Executive! ^^;;; Keep up the good work!
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I so loved that chapter. Hiei is just so confused about his feelings and I love how he got them out in song. It was nice to see all that face time between the two of them - after chapters of teasing, they finally got to have a serious discussion! Who cares about the media, they should just be in love! (It will probably sell more albums)

Again, I love your writing and I squeal way too much when you update.
person hColleen
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, explains why Kurama's all hormonal over Hiei...I'd like to know why Hiei is the way he is, though...interesting that he can't stand the touch of his family, but permits Kurama to touch him....and with them sharing a room, wouldn't the press "eat them alive" anyways?