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for Model and the Bass

by CrimsonFox234

person darkrosedamel
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what are you talking about? this is a great fic. the begining started a little rough but it got better. i cant wait for the next chapter.
person RyouKitsune [The Ever-lazy girl who never signs in]
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::claps::
Oh my god, yay!
Please write more soon, and a lemon part too!, because I love your work!
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome although I hate Toguro, but then I guess I'm supposed to. Hiei's so cute starting to give in to his feelings for Kurama. Update soon.
person Everqueen
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, the chapter was good, but Hiei's character changed drastically I think. I did enjoy the whole text message and I think most of that should stay. I can't wait for the rewrite and I was glad to read the chapter as it is. Thanks for feeding my addiction, even slightly.
person SweetMisery1
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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continue soon
person SweetMisery1
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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continue soon
person Lady Baltimore
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your poor thing... the chapter's okay ^^... and it's perfectly fine to "sow your wild oats"! lol Okay, I confess, I like Loveless too (have you heard of Gankutsuou?). I could never really get into Gundam Wing though... was too much of an illiterate hoe-cake-ass-byitch to understand any of that complex shit back in the old 'Toonie days. Ahhh sweet memories of young blahkity blahk blahkhhh... .... .... My poor Crimson! Are you depressed dah-link? T~T

Kampai Kurimuson-SAMAAAAAAaaaaaah!!!! (Hack!... ><)
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this chapter was cute, and I would really like a picture of the two of them dressed up, making out in the back of the limo!

And may I say - LOVELESS! Holy crap! I haven't been able to think straight since I watched the series in September. Soubi is far too yummy. I'm glad to know that others are discovering it as well.
person comicfancat
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To be rewritten?? Why? it wasn't all that bad and it keeps the story flowing nicely.Though I hope the next update isn't as long a wait.
person RChan
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BAH REWRITTEN!? NO! I thought that chapter was really good actually! What about "To be Continued"? I want to see that! BEcAUSE I WANT TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS FROM YOU! Rawr! *BWinner seethes for a bit* Please tell me you are going to try to update this as soon as you can. Because I love how this fic is coming along and can't wait to see how it all turns out!