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for Model and the Bass

by CrimsonFox234

schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good - you do alternate universe very well. I love how you included Koenma and Botan (despite my yaoi fangirlness, I always thought they make a cute couple).

Kurama has no idea what's coming - Hiei's salve for a week? I can't wait to see more!

Oh yeah, and my favourite line of the week is: "If she really thinks rubbing her breasts against me is really going to make me straight… she’s denser than she looks."

Please, write more!
person bob
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ha ha i wonder if kurama's gonna have as much as he thinks hes going to
person bob
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i was actually reluctant to read this cuz i didn't know who u would pair kurama up with but i luv it now! i can't wait until chapter 3, i want to see if kurama actually wins! continue! oh and really big boobs in ur face r scary lol
person darkperfection
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this is cute and really good please update I want to know who wins I hope it's Kurama!
person Mini
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww Ilove this fiction please update soon.
person Crimson
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon Iwant to know what happens next I hope it's Hiei
person December Wind
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your AUs are awesome..
Just please make sure to finish them! I can't stand it when likely AUs don't have any endings.
I always love Kurama as seme, and I can't really tell if he is or not, but this is great all the same.
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is just too cute. I can't wait for them to spar, I want Kurama to get his kiss. Okay, Kurama's like way OOC but who cares he's adorable. I wish some of the other like 90 people who read this would send you a review. It can be really disheartening when only one percent of the readers review, trust me I know, but at least you know they're reading. Udate soon, even if it's only for me.
person Clara
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!

Love your story! Can't wait to see what happens!

Clara
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how sweet, Kurama has a crush on Hiei. Good chapter, update soon.