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December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
....So, I twitched a little bit as this story ended. You left me a veyr unhappy person. And unlike when I reread my own stuff, I can't go in and finish the story myself. I'd really, really like to see more of this story.
...Please? heh. Anyways, my emails firestarter13_13@yahoo.com if this is posted elsewhere or something of the sort. I"m on tumble and whatever just in case... Maybe. I'm going to stalk to rest of your stories now. Laters.
...Please? heh. Anyways, my emails firestarter13_13@yahoo.com if this is posted elsewhere or something of the sort. I"m on tumble and whatever just in case... Maybe. I'm going to stalk to rest of your stories now. Laters.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Story excerpt: "“They weren’t too hard, but the leader, she was always a better fighter than me…”
“I.”
“What?”
“She was always a better fighter than I.”"
Review: Um, no. I is not right in this instance. If Hiei had said, "she was a better fighter than I was.", it would work, but simply putting I is a grammatical error and makes the sentence sound like something out of a first grader's mouth.
“I.”
“What?”
“She was always a better fighter than I.”"
Review: Um, no. I is not right in this instance. If Hiei had said, "she was a better fighter than I was.", it would work, but simply putting I is a grammatical error and makes the sentence sound like something out of a first grader's mouth.
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it please contiue updateing it
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Need to continue this story CrimsonFox! It's really good and sweet! Kurama groping Hiei all the time i admit is a little... different, but it's funny and adorable. Please keep writing!
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, the title reminds me of Bueaty and the Beast. xD ........... O_O, not that i think >Kurama< is a beast.
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xD, hahaha jk. I LOVE THIS FUCKING STORY! It's so ..... FUCKING AWSOME! *o* It pulled at my heart strings *cough* if i had any :/, but i was so sad when there werent anymore chapters to read ;o; Please Please Please Please Please Please POST MORE CHAPTERS!!!! PLEASE!!!!! I need more! Its like a drug and you have gotten me hooked!
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xD, hahaha jk. I LOVE THIS FUCKING STORY! It's so ..... FUCKING AWSOME! *o* It pulled at my heart strings *cough* if i had any :/, but i was so sad when there werent anymore chapters to read ;o; Please Please Please Please Please Please POST MORE CHAPTERS!!!! PLEASE!!!!! I need more! Its like a drug and you have gotten me hooked!
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May 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so so much!! please update very very soon!!!
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really really good it has a good plot, from my view and you need to update!!!
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February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey awsome story! i really hope that you update soon. keep up the great work
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Cookies and pocky for you! Update soon for yamyams! ^_^ I really think it's awsome!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OoooOooo please update soon! I freaking love this story awesome job so far!...PLEASE UPPDAATTEEE!!