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Totally understandable. i get those sometimes. That was great! It was defintly worth the wait! I can't believe Koenma would sink so low! I hope Kuwabara does the right thing! Oh and I hope Hiei and Kurama are able to hide them for awhile! Please update soon!

Not bad, can you please finish it? I would love to read more.

Love it! Now if somebody I know would hurry up and finish with the chapters that she is supposed to be working with! Grrr... Altar, if you don't hurry... grrr.

Just joking. I can wait.

Huh?

Altar! Get your lazy arse over here right nbow and fix these chapters! I want to read more baby! I liked the Jin/Kuwa lemon just fine it might get messed up if Altar touches it!

Holy Snapple Batman! I forgot to rate the story! I am a retard! Sorry Sury-chan!

It was good, especially since it's not betaed and english is not your native language. I was confused, but I'll let it slide this once ^_~. Just kidding. But anyway, are you thinking about continuing this? You know? Like turning it from a one-shot to many chapters? Because I can see it doing more chapters and having many readers and reviews. I mean, there is sooo much you can do with this! Like how does Yusuke feel about Jin and Kuwa? Who was the other demon who wanted Kuwa? What is Koenma's true plans other then making him a spirit detective and having him marry a human woman? Things like that. You should totally continue this! Also you should defintly post this again when your beta betas this...I hope that wasn't confusing. Anyway, excellent story and if you are going to continue this story then update soon!! ^_~.

I'm working on this KuwaL. *nods enthusiastically* Yep! I'll have it done up by noon tomorrow!