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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter i like the fact that yusuke can get pregnant and that hiei still wants him.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Sury and I are working as fast as we can! 'Sides, the longer y'all wait, the better!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oy! I think I messed with the format, but it sounds better! *cackles* Yusuke's in so much trouble now!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeep!
And he will get in sooo much more! You have no idea!!!
And he will get in sooo much more! You have no idea!!!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Don't worry too much about the grammer. Keep writing and use a grammer/spell check and you'll improve every time. Update soon. I can't wait to see Yusuke's reaction to his wannabe lover.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This Fic is the best PLESE UPDATE as soon as you can.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I love it. Hiei is such a cocky bastard. I can't wait for the lemon. I just hope it's a long lemon and they just don't rush through it ^_~
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To kit-kit san,
I never meant that I thought you have flamed me, but if you have read my chapter well, you will know that I meantioned the behave of some people on this site in generall. And that I also told to everyone to read my bio before you judge about me.
It wasn´t meant to make you feel bad, sorry for that. But I am tired of telling every time that English isn´t my first speech, and wanted that the people sometimes read the bio first, because thats what it is for.
I have seen a many people here who have problems with English too and some of them have gotten nasty comments about it. I am not found of that behave and have sorryly thought yours was one too.
see, it is harder you would think to write something in your home speech and then to translate it into a readable form of English.
But from now on, not one fik from me will miss this little entry again. Maybe that will hold us all out of trouble like this here.
Thanks Altar! Love you for that!
Suryallee
I never meant that I thought you have flamed me, but if you have read my chapter well, you will know that I meantioned the behave of some people on this site in generall. And that I also told to everyone to read my bio before you judge about me.
It wasn´t meant to make you feel bad, sorry for that. But I am tired of telling every time that English isn´t my first speech, and wanted that the people sometimes read the bio first, because thats what it is for.
I have seen a many people here who have problems with English too and some of them have gotten nasty comments about it. I am not found of that behave and have sorryly thought yours was one too.
see, it is harder you would think to write something in your home speech and then to translate it into a readable form of English.
But from now on, not one fik from me will miss this little entry again. Maybe that will hold us all out of trouble like this here.
Thanks Altar! Love you for that!
Suryallee
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
listen about before im sorry if you thought that my review was a flame because it wasn't. i didn't mean for it to sound like that i just thought that you would like to know that there were a few mistakes is all. i know you said in the 2nd chapter that it wasn't anybody in this fan-site that you were writing that author note to but i just can't help but think that i did something wrong so from the bottom of my heart i apologize for earlier review.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh... I'm working on it right now and believe me, you're not all that bad! It's just the few rules of English here and there, plus sentence composition. *hugs Suryallee*