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for To the hell with the abyss!

by Suryallee7104

person Altar of Wishes
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well... Hiei does get what he wants after all 'cept for the chapter black tape. I wonder what would happen if he did get that tape and watched it...
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yusuke didn't stand a chance. Hee Hee I'd love to see Hiei as a naked female. Update soon.
person kwitchr
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps on geting better and better PLESE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN.
person Suryallee
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear fluffyzbrevis
I told you that I am evil!
Sorry but I have to translate them before I can send them to Altar chan or to Tina chan.
It takes time and I got no reaction so fare back on my first try to write one complete in english( the last chapter of my Jin/Kazuma fik, so fare.)
So you sorryly have to wait some time.
( Voice sounds a little funny, because the Authoress have put her armor on and waves with a very sharp sword back to her beloved reviewer)
person HakodaMaki
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... will there be a chapter 3??... THERE MUST BE A CHAPTER THREE!! IT'S TOO HOT TO PASS UP TT____TT *sigh* Well, now that that is over with... I really like the story! Yay. mY comment ^^; Have a nice day!!~
person fluffyzbrevis
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you do realize thats its completely and utterly evil to leave us all hanging like that, without our wonderfully expected lemon scene. ::pouts:: meanie. are you still having trouble with your beta? well i hope whatever problems you are having with them are fixed or you get a new one or something. its not that you writing is bad, in fact its better than many native english speaking authors ive read. so anyway. keep up the good work and put a lemon in the near future. preferably the next chapter. ::hides long sharp object behind back::
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't think Yusuke was expecting Hiei's reaction to that revelation lol Great job, please update soon.
person kit-kit
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow the two chapter were perfect you have two of the best betas for the story. they did a wonderful job of beting your story.
person Medusa
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Okay... *breathes* You thanked me? Thank you! *spazzes out and hugs* Yeah go Hiei-kun! Mmmm.... I wonder what Yusuke tastes like myself!
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!