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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally hot lemons. I love Hiei's pervertedness with Yusuke, it's so perfect! Yusuke is so sexy, especially in his demon form. I wish Hiei would have pulled on Yusuke's long black hair too. I'm a hair-puller, LOL, until my husband starting pulling my hair too, ouch! No more hair-pulling, oh well. Fortunately, I can still write it in my fics, ne? Looking forward to the next chappie ^_^
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, girl!
I came and read.
I think this is pretty darn good for someone who has taught herself English. I found a few spelling, word choice, and grammar mistakes, but nothing that can't be fixed. I wouldn't mind helping you out, so you can email me some chapters any time and I would be happy to look them over for you.
All and all, it's a really good story and I love the pairing. I can't wait to read more. ^^
I came and read.
I think this is pretty darn good for someone who has taught herself English. I found a few spelling, word choice, and grammar mistakes, but nothing that can't be fixed. I wouldn't mind helping you out, so you can email me some chapters any time and I would be happy to look them over for you.
All and all, it's a really good story and I love the pairing. I can't wait to read more. ^^
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is really good. And I'm like u I dont leave comments if i dont like a story. I think its horrible to bash pple like that just cuz someone doesnt like there stories or pairings. Me myeslf have always wanted a Hiei/Yusuke story. I think its an interesting mix. and love the story she wrote. So i hope she does come out of hidding soon cuz i want more of the story. hugsP* sorry u got hurt that really sucks and pple shouldnt be that mean. I know its hard to write stories.
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome. please update soon :)
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow the lemon was hot i have to read more. i want to see yusuke withering under hiei.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, now that Hiei has him theres no chance of him escaping *evil laugh* Not that I think Yusuke would want to at this point. Great job, update soon please
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, can't wait for Yusuke's reaction when the drug wears off. If your e-mail means you're an artist too I'd love to see what you draw. Update soon.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ALTAR!!!
Honestly, dont get me into more writing trouble as before!
You and your crazy Good ideas, you saw what that brought out in me the last time!
I will never live that stupid fairytale down...
I love you and your ideas really, but please, please, please, dont input my brain with more trouble I can handle at the moment!
(Doges sharp objekts and tomatoes on her back with a shild, because her readers want her to update)
Honestly, dont get me into more writing trouble as before!
You and your crazy Good ideas, you saw what that brought out in me the last time!
I will never live that stupid fairytale down...
I love you and your ideas really, but please, please, please, dont input my brain with more trouble I can handle at the moment!
(Doges sharp objekts and tomatoes on her back with a shild, because her readers want her to update)
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a female fire demon all i have to say is nice.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* Yusuke is in for it now isn't he? Can't wait to see how this plays out. Update soon please