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for To the hell with the abyss!

by Suryallee7104

person Ana
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was great!
person Pankaja
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ur great dont worry abt the flames they are just by sum dumb pplwho are jealous of u .plspost ur story in fanfiction.net pls .it wud be real grateful to u
person fire_lilly_fox
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure I want to know what the prank was. I'm too scared. please update soon. I want to know what happens next.
person jazzy
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Find this story to be pretty good, no ones ever done a double male pregnancy, from what I've read, before.

I like it. Though I do find it a little difficult to navigate the sentence structures at times, It just adds to the character of the story. I find it interesting and inspiring to see non native english speakers take such a huge risk and write in english, It shows me how deeply they love to write and how much they love the fandom, to go beyond the language barrier.

Hopefuly my ramblings somewhat legiable. Your dong a cool job of writing so don't get discouraged and I have to say you show a lot of strength, your life doesn't sound so easy, and that means it takes time to write.
person kit-kit
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow i loved this chapter i can't wait to see what yusuke and hiei kids look like and such.
person Laesk Light
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a good story, i would like to read more when more is added.
person koneko
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did you give up on this story? Please update soon if not. I realy want to know what happens next.
person Clarise
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even though the pairing is a bit uncommon, this was well written!
I guess I kind of liked Hiei being on top more, but...
The thing about both of them being pregnant is a bit confusing (and uncommon), but it sounds like it would be a really funny situation. Keep up the good work!
person XxBatsxX
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O WOW!!! ...... This story is Fucking Hot!!! *o* Whoooo~ I love it! ^o^ Please update it! Please, Please, Please!!!!!!
person Mazy3261
schedule June 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love your fic! It's hot!