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by hColleen

person FaythDarkStarSlayer
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was just a great story. I really loved it. The way it was written was absolutly amazing. It was totally in charater for Karasu. There are alot of fic's (not all on this site) that screw it up. I think you should do one on Hiei's POV when he and Kurama stole the artifacts of darkness till he fought Yusuke (or something like that). I think it would make a good story. If it ends up anything like this I know it will be great.
person Eye of Ra (not signed in)
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my Ra... that was.. yet again.. *awesomeness* ... as its yet again.. light out as i read this....... LOL... i have way bad sleeping habits. but today..er..yesterday.. i had a migraine.. yeh.. that was fun.. but Karasu made me smile... so i guess that's something.. Karasu, Kurama, and Youko.... and your beautiful writing, of course. but yeh... i think i was attempting to write.. or do some work or something.. i dont know. LOL. yeh. today.. i was just an insomniac. but whatever.. i think ima head off to try and sleep now.. lol. xD

later!!
person thoth_moon
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can really think to say is... another great chapter, and to be redundant, you're awesome at portraying Karasu!!! XD
person thoth_moon
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believe that "Queen of Harassment" would be a most befitting title for you. ^__^ Oh, by the way... you put an extra "t" in "literally" at the end of your closing A/N's. XP I'd look forward to another dream- you write those quite well.
person thoth_moon
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I meant... I'm not sure. You just do a good personification of Karasu, and for some reason I feel that it suits you.

I think that this is one of the few stories I've come across that actually keeps Karasu in all his twisted glory, and that is why I'm still reading it. The way you write his thoughts, word his desires, his dreams- I find it all very true to his character, as I see it. Keep it up ^__^
person YuYuHakushoismyLIFE
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very enjoyable. I'm nearly speechless, it's just so Karasu. I hope you continue with it.
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, very dark. You write Karasu very well. I am enjoying it a lot. The only downside is that I know the outcome. But I doo look forward to your interpretation on the events leading to it and the final fight. Keep up the good work.
person Hoshi Hikara
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God hC, how do you manage to write this guy so well...? It makes me shiver (and bitch at the crow trailing me, but I won't tell him it's your fault.)