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for The Pain of Pleasure

by Saku

person AnnaJaganshi
schedule August 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE KEEP WRITING THE STORY! It's going really really really well so far! It's sad but really sweet so far, you're right, it made me cry alright. Please update!
person Baby_Neko
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooo that was a nice writing.I am very interested in it.Hope you can update soon! ^__^
person Watch Me
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My gods, that was hot. You are truly talented. Your characterazations o.O were pretty on the mark, but slid a little. Still, a great piece.
person Jayn
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very well-written. ^_^ Luc it!!
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was good
person Kat1132
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was actually really good for a first attempt. It was original in it's own extent. Although I may have fallen out of touch. I can't wait until you continue, you will continue right? This is really good.
person Foxgirl_500
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! That was awsome, there's just not much eles I can say. oh, and it seemed pretty lemonish to me, just keep tryinh and you can make theses as graphic as you want. (it took me a looong time to get where I am now in lemons!)
person Suryallee
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read it before I thing on mediaminer?
I normally do not read such angsty stories but this one hooked me. It is good idea but I dont like abuse and it makes no sence to me why people react so, but in reallity people do worse to people they love and you describet Hieis arguments for his actions out of psychologie(?) good.
I give you 4 stars for that.
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. This one drew me in. I love agnst. love it. i drown in it. It was a really sweet and tragic story, but at the same time it's like PLEASE SOMEONE HUG ME. haha. i just loved it. =]
person DarkRoseDamael
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you going to finish this? it was on fanfiction but then i couldnt find it and you never continued it.