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I've read this somewhere before but I can't remember. All I know is that I loved it to death. Sad, but great story Lalachan! Keep up the good work!

Very good. I enjoyed it.

Eve

Wow, I absolutely loved your story. You built up the suspense really well, I was ready to skip down to see who died, I was so worried. I feel
like such an emo chick because I was so sad when Kurama died, I was so engrossed in the story. You wrote it really well, I'm actually kinda
jealous that I can't write that well. Even when you were writing the angst it was well done because sometimes when people write angst it's just like too much and I can't stand reading the rest of the story because it wasn't written well. But yours was and I was so relieved when it was just a dream. I also loved your style, it wasn't necessarily unique (no offense) but it was sensual suring the sex scence and it reminded me a little of Anne Rice. Everything was descreptive and it was emotional but it wasn't over done.The whole fic was awesome and I didn't notice any mistakes. I'd love to read more stuff by you and I think you should keep writing because...that was just awesome....and yeah i'm done now and I'm hungry so I'm gonna go find something to eat. And sorry for the really long review but I had to say a lot of stuff.

that story was sooo good. i've had similar dreams like that and they do mess with you when you wake up. 'Dante's prayer' goes well with it. i love Lorrena McKinnet. she rules!!! I love your story keep up the good work.

I have read this one before on a other site but its still good.