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for Times of Jeolousy

by YnaraKit

person Heavenly Nadeshiko
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know, I know this was written so long ago that it doesn't even matter anymore, but I have to get this out of my chest. You do realize that Hiei has never called Kuwabara that disgusting name? That it is a fandom made out name to bash him and trash him? It wouldn't have been better if you would have used canon Hiei's insult for Kuwabara like 'fool' 'stupid oaf' etc. Just because you used that 'name', I lost completely interest in the story.
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great little story!
I really enjoyed it!!
I am going to see what others you have wriiten now...
Hope you have some more Hieibara goodness for me ... hehe
^_^
person Not-just-a-pretty-face
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS!!! Plain and simple, I just love this. I don't care about perfect grammer or anything like that, your a great writer and I wish you would continue. Hey maybe you could do one in Kazuma's P.O.V? I'd love that. I'm a huge Kuwa fan, he's my favorite character, and this pairing is my favorite pairing. It's a shame the pairing's so rare *sighs* So don't give up! Please put out more Hiei/Kuwa fics! After all nobody got anywhere by not trying *smiles* Continue! *gives puppy dog eyes* Please... Love ya!

Much love from your loyal fan
Not-just-a-pretty-face
person Ali
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute story!!! love this pair. Great job.
TTFN^-^
person Anon
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now I know that Kuwabara and Hiei are out of the picture, how about a Kurama/Yukina lemon?
person The Green Knight
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to be tortured by Kurama and Hiei too... Kuwa's such a lucky kitten-boy!
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fun. A shrimp and his very endowed baka. Sorry. That was funny.
person Frost Dragon
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Kurama's a molester! No I'm just joking, but I wonder what his deal was... Kuwa's younger than him and trusts him.
person Suryallee
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have no clue how this has happened, but if anyone can tell me I would be glad!
I leaved a reviuw today under my name and it showed up with Anons nick insteed!
Can anyone please tell me WHY???
I leave it here as i normaly do it or Anon must have leaved the same comment including my grammar disaster of spelling! But I dont think so. I am very sorry for that Anon! I really have no clue how this had happened!!!
Suryallee
person bob
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, you captured that feeling you get when you're in a bad mood and everyone seems so happy and you just want to throw rocks at them.