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for The Vacation (yeah right)

by Evey

person Natalya
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I am an author myself and am guilty of leaving my readers evil cliffies...now I see what they go through and man, it is NOT pretty! Please...more...soon?
person Natalya
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stop leaving the damn cliffies! I am going to get a complex if you keep this up! I love this story and I want you to continue but the cliff hangers are killing me! Update soon!
person kitsunechibiko
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
they r waaaaaaaaaay out of character, and u know that, but it makes it a hell of a lot funnier. if my mom wasn't here i'd be laughing.
person Natalya
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Smiles* No, you're right, I am a girl. If I have to review a thousand times over to keep you writing this, I will!
person blissfully unknown
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yusuke will get kidnapped! that way, hiei and kurama can fight over who gets to go save him! great story by the way!!! ~_^
person Natalya
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for my requested pairing. This story is getting more and more hilarious with every chapter and I'm loving it! Please keep going!
person Natalya
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's getting better and better as you go along! Update soon!
person dragon
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I like this story. It is interesting and funny. HxY had better be kissing soon!!! UPDATE!!!!!!
person Natalya
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I do hope that you continue this! It's really, really funny!
person Evey
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, author here... Okay, Im new at this, so what's a beta, fill me in, people. And also, anyone mind if I add some OC's? They're really hot guys---- Twins-- Matt and Mark. If you guys dont tell me in one day, I am adding them.
Love,
The Author to the truest!! Ha, Ha,
(Ill write more now, thanks for reviewing)
Eve