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come on, finish the story. I like how unique this story is. I also like how plausible it is. I really liked it! Please work on it!!!

O_O!!!! WTF is gonna happen Next!?!?! WTF IS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT!?!?! AHHHHH!!!!! *Passes Out* .............. -30 minutes later- .... <_<;; *cough* Dude you have to update, cause i need to know WTF IS GONNA HAPPEN NEXT!!!!!! AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! *head explodes* :3 hehehe sorry about that, it seems i am a little eccentric at the moment =D

o.0 plisss... >.< dont drop this fic... is not the tipical KxH YxH... i know that AFF is not the same but not because that reason you are going to drop it T.T, i will wait until your fic is finish n.n jojojijjjajaja XD

O.O OMFG, I thought you were dead!!! I clicked on the link to this story in my favorites cause I had forgotten what it was about, and I saw that there was a new chapter. I seriously thought you had like....died, or something. Ha, I'll bet I'm on of the few original people that will come back and stay with you all the way through. It's been so long since one of my old favorites had been updated. I was so shocked. But this is really cool. What Hiei's dad is doing reminds me of what Orochimaru did to Sasuke (in Naruto). XD I was screamin' "Orochimaru" the whole time. Ew....snake bastard! XD ~Ys

Your story was short but interesting. Please update.

Whoa! I didn't even see that coming! Hiei's DAD?!?! Wow, you got me. That's a pretty good plot twist. i've read alot of fanfiction and I never see anything that talks about or features Hiei's dad. It'll be fun to read about that, and see how you portray him.

And welcome to LiveJournal, there's a bunch of us from aff.net over there talking about our boys.

Waaaaah! #^^#

The tone of this chapter was different from the others - more warm towards Hiei. It seems Yusuke is not as unfeeling towards Hiei as I thought - but Hiei does need love, and I can't wait to see where you take this, because I'm sure Hiei is not very accepting of love and it will take alot of convincing from his teammates.

It's also nice to see that there are other Loveless fans out there.

You had better not drop this fic. The beavers will come after you like somethin' you don't know! Teehee! But please update. This story rocks. In the beginning, I thought it was Youko who was being evil, because a lot of people tend to abb. Youko and Yuusuke's names a "Y" so I didn't know who it was. Didn't matter though, it was still evil! I think I like the idea of Yusuke being there instead of Youko. Yep, like that much more. Please update soon. I really like this one.

whatever your going to do i beg thee not to do it. dont hurt hiei anymore! lol nice fic.