rate_review Reviews

I can definitly appreciate this! I love it! So far it holds true to almost every god awful Mary-Sue I've come across. Thank you for making me laugh.

Oh Lord, that was priceless! This has to be one of the best written Mary Sue fics I've ever seen, and considering the subject matter that's saying a lot. Please, write more of this if you have time. I think I'll go die laughing now. :)

Hey, thanks for offering to explain the Mary-Sue thing :D (I must have sounded pretty confused)
But, I decline- the only reason I'm sort of in the dark is because I will myself not to click into any of the Mary-Sue-mess fics~
(Of course, yours was an exception, I'm really enjoying it!)
Can't wait till Hiei comes out.
By the way, I really liked the part where Kurama tried to bite his arm off.
That was original, yet, I can imagine Kurama trying.

I loved the part where Kurama tried to chew off his arm. Once again great job.

so noted about the grammar. lol! I loved the part about how marysues use Genkai, it's so true. This is hilarious.

UBDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can almost picture a well written character being dragged along, trying to appologize for everything....lol (okay...over active imagination here...). This is funny and I'm really glad I didn't have to explain "cat girl" :D I've been trying to find the comic that introduced the "cat girl"....anyways :D This is fun, and I hope it's fun to write in the middle of the other angst you write :D (oh, lordy! Is she gonna.....oh, gods!!!!....is she gonna like try to watch? *shudder*...at least the cat girl I live with is too young to be allowed to read yaoi...thank gods!...though, she does make suggestions...)

LOL yours is funnier than mine though *pouts* I wish I would write good stories like you.....You reviews for my Mary-Sue fic, and I return the favor it only seem right, right? And if you can, read my new story 'Take Over' and give me a couple of pointers? I would really like that I'm just starting out and I'm not so good with them as you can see on my profile....I just figured since you have sucessful stories you wouldn't helping out a stressful young authoress in her time of need *puppy eyes* PLEASE?! if you have the time I mean but if ur busy *sighs* I understand....


Hope U update soon
Kit-Kit
A Mary-Sue Hater

Sounds like alot of fun!
I will come back to read the rest!

I live with one of those....*shudder* Don't you feel sorry for me? lol And my writing only leads to "story ideas".....*shake*....It took *months* to make her stop squealing "kawaii!!!!!" and other things...*sigh*

Oh, check this out, you'll find it amusing :D http://www.warehouse23.com/item.html?id=SP3001

Anyways...goofy stories are good :D I likey :D