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XDDDD Oh, God, I'm having a ball with this one. It's just too funny, and too true!!! Oh, can you mess around with the "powers" a little bit? I recall a lot of stories acting like Sailor Moon, where they yell out whatever freakin' nonsense can possibly come to them (almost always to do with hearts and angels), and I love messin' around with those things. Keep up the hilarious work, I can't wait to see what "little" Mary Sue does next!

I really am having fun imagining my poor OC followling Mary around, trying to stop her (to no avail, of course). Yeah, I know...not really the point, but still...it's fun for me.

The beginning of the lemon was totally totally wondrous! I wanted to kill Mary, too, even though I knew she had to show up. I'm sure my own feelings pale in comparison to Kurama's and Hiei's. This story really is a lot of fun to read. There was a really awsome line Hiei said...and I should have copied it to paste here and fawn over...

I'm glad you're having fun writing this. That's the most important thing. (what am I saying...I admit to being a review whore, first class)

Forgive me! I lurk-read! Anyway, I don't have much criticism to give— actually none at all. Although, Botan's little scary moment in chapter four reminded me of Suryallee's picture of Botan towering over Hiei with scary flames an stuff... *nods* I liked the part where Hiei was wanting to kill Mary Sue, Koenma kept reminding him what would happen.

~~Altar of Wishes

*dies laughing* This is one of the better MS parodies that I've read. Just seeing Mary dancing around like the Great Saiyaman is...just...HILARIOUS. And the Kurama/Hiei was pretty hot, even though I am not an avid fan of that pairing.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! Explain to me why I hadn't read this? (Oh yeah, because I suck). I can't say that I've ever read a story with a Mary Sue since I was warned about them fairly early on, and I'm not really into OCs anyway, so I managed to escape pretty much unharmed. It doesn't look that way for our poor boys though.

Dude, this is really really funny - I love how you butcher the grammar - and they notice it! Also the line: " As long as she was somehow physically attached to a bishonen she was happy", well, I think that goes for any of us any day really.

And - yeah - you have to qualify why Hiei wouldn't kill her because she would be in 1000 pieces before she could scream "Kawaii!". I say let Keiko do the job.

Gods...poor Hiei and Kurama...I'm scared! lol I can imagine my poor OC (she has powers, but they're finite, she had to learn to control them, and she's got faults) flaming Mary's hair or random bits of her just for the hell of it (she has a temper...). I should write Bekka again...just for the fun of it. It'd be fun to write your Mary and my Bekka into a story, though...I think Bekka may...cause the demise of Mary...but...Mary can't be killed, can she? Oh, dear

Smangst...poor Hiei and Kurama!!!!!

ROFLMAO!!! *tears pour out eyes at laughter* This is the funniest fanfiction I have ever read, seriously! This was ninjanuity major on your part, and I'm enjoying this immensly. One can only hope that Hiei will survive the encounter of the Mary Sue. Update when you can, this story is hilarious!
Sayuri-chan

Oh man... you know what's funny, but sad at the same time? I've come across stuff almost exactly like this, except the "writers" were freaking serious about their OC. This is satire at its best, man! XD

Oh my GOD! Poor guys! How in the world are they going to get rid of something as awful as that? Will Hiei attempt to cut her to ribbons? Will Kurama actually gnaw on his own arm again? This was hilarious and I hope you'll update soon.

I'm still laughing! There was too many funny lines to say which one was the best. All the stuff you wrote about the comparison of powers was too true. I can't wait to see what adventures Mary has next.