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for The voice of the waves

by Suryallee7104

person Alex Erdman
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE MITARAI!!! HE IS AWSOME HE AND TOUYA ARE THE BEST CHARACTERS IN YYH!!! at least the best MALE characters, though honestly Yukina is my favorite character, keiko is cool though but she comes after the ice/water users...AWSOME FIC! I would love to see a touyaXyukina thrown into the mix, but youre doing great! I have also read your burning of ice at keiko's demons, its great too.!!!
person The Green Knight
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet and sad at the same time! Mitarai's deat was so painful and silent-- poetic even!
person Altar of Wishes
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pries Kuwabara off of Keiko and Kyoshi* I'm glad that Keiko and Mitarai got some lovin' from each other! Even though I love Yusuke/Keiko, I do like to see Keiko with others and I think that Mitarai/Keiko is sweet too!
person The Green Knight
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Kyoshi baby! I always knew that he was agressive!
person The Green Knight
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Maybe CWolf will help with the English... anyways, it's good for Mitarai to get some. *pries Altar off with a jackhammer*
person Altar of Wishes
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey... stop worrying! Besides, I bet you that every author on this site would edit for you if asked. You know I would! Mitarai's so dweebish sometimes! He's the kind of guy that I'd like to squish in a warm hug...
person Altar of Wishes
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You did spell his name right, in fact you spelled them all right from what I could see. Thanks a lot Suryallee!