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for Shattered soul

by Suryallee7104

person Suryallee
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ALTAR!
What is this with you all people that you glomp me everywhere I went??
I missed you here you know that?
(Pouts)
person Altar of Wishes
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's because I love and miss you on the internet! I hate my job sometimes... I considered quitting before I my first paycheck too.
person Altar of Wishes
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah... so Jin's a good guy in this? I could never imagine him changing sides! It doesn't happen (in my mind)! *glomps Sury-san*
person The Green Knight
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well now... the spaghetti sauce is getting thicker with every chapter! Oh I do love Hiei/Keiko pairings and how they're slowly coming together as the story continues! Is Yukina going to be the priestess? Silly me! I should read further rather than ask questions!
person The Green Knight
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could I not like it? Hiei's going to save Keiko from all this bullsh!t! I feel so sad about Atsuko because that was her son that betrayed her and humanity by being a butt... god I want to slap some sense into Yusuke!
person annette
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story its really good please update soon
person The Green Knight
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Hiei/Keiko fic! I knew it! *hugs the fic tightly*
person Altar of Wishes
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi... thanks for another chapter. I'm sorry I haven't been around, but I feel overworked and overdrugged.
person ZeldaFirz
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a departure from your usual stories, but I really like it so far. It is dark -- poor Keiko. I wonder, is there a reason Keiko was not warned of the attack, but rather left abandoned and alone? Yukina knew and said nothing. Kurama took his mother to safety, but thought so little of Keiko that he left her to die? And of course, Yusuke was beyond cruel to her. Hiei showed some compassion, but he could have taken her to safety beforehand, as well. I'm so angry with my YYH guys! Your writing improves with each story. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person The Green Knight
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... let it burn. Anyway, I hope find out why the hell Yusuke and the others have turned for the darkside. Oh yeah, Altar's been feeling sick lately so she'll be around sometime tomorrow.