rate_review Reviews

Ah, a nice, healthy smutty story. I absolutely *adore* this setup, and it's got to be the hottest action I've read in a long time. I like the human aspevts too, which make it more believable (eg Keiko being to embarassed to buy lube - I know I would be!)

Congrats to you, this has been a well-thought-out, enjoyable read.

P.S. Up with m/f stories! Up with Keiko stories!

“You ready Ms. Yaoi Writer? Here cums the big climax.”...that got me rolling on the floor. Kaiko always seemed to be the yaoi writing type!! Great job!! <-If I was in her shoes...I woulda done the exact same thing. -_- Please continue it was great!!! And really funny!!

Wow. I love the way you portrayed Keiko...the sex was very hot...just DAMN. <3 I looove it.

love the story r they gonna make a relationship out of them three?? please say this is not a one shot thing^^

write more stories! i love it! i think so far i prefer the elevator, but that's just because keiko/kurama is my second favorite pairing (my first is hiei/shizuru, but you never see that, so for all intents and purposes, they're tied for first). keep them coming, and i'll keep eating it up!

CONGRATULATIONS!!! I was going to write this pairing or threesome because I had never seen it before and you wrote it!!! yayay! I loved it thanks! Now the freakin people won't get mad at me because I posted a pairing I wanted to see before theirs lol! Bye hun!