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for Old Promises and New Beginnings

by cillaxox

schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chaps again, as always! And now I should really go do my homework..>>;
person The Green Knight
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Psst... your title has three "n"s in it.
person KuwaLove
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved that chapter! ^_^ It was awesome ^_^. Excellent chapter! I can't wait until the individual dates come ^_^. I just love this story! Update soon, as well as your other story ^_^.
person The Green Knight
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Minako = Aeris
Makoto = Tifa
Kuwa = Cloud


I'm sorry, but that's what I got out of all of this after reading it again! I started laughing and stuff because of that and because the story's funny anyway. I think that it's very cute! Kuwabara has his hands full with those girls (I personally like Minako)! They should Kuwa's dad, but he's not seen much in the Manga and not at all in the Anime!

Guess what? I'm listening to "Crush" ('twas American at first) in Chinese and it accents this story very well!
person Katzz
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, in the mortal world they can't marry two people. But that's a human law. How about the Spirit world? Teh Sailor scouts are celestial beings right? And Kuwabara is a Spirit Dectective.
Is it possible for the girls to share Kuwabara? I like both of them with him.
person Katzz
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Smacks head in dismay.

I can't believe that ch4 was updated and I missed it! I'm glad I desiced to go through the YYH fics to find the stories I want to add to my recomned stories list or I wouldn't have found this!!!

So Kazuma remembers his promise to both. He is willing to uphold his word to both ladies. But arte they ready to share?
It seems that cold feet and nervousness is going around for all three. I hope they work things out.

Well, at first I was going to say that Yusuke changed his tune, but then I realized he took a hostile view to them because they were infringing on his turf, in his home.
person KuwaLove
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great ^_^ I'm so glad you didn't forget about this story! I absoultly love it! It's an excellent story! I can't wait to see what will happen on their date! Please update soon ^_^
person JovianWolfGirl
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey cillxox I just want to say I love the squabble between Yusuke and Makoto I hope there more!
person natsumi_chan
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far! Highly, HIGHLY amusing! Sp looking forward to chapter five!
person She-wolf
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was great chapter! hahaha, I can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder how Kazuma going to act with them I hope Artmise talk soon. man Kazuma would freak! You got to update soon!