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Very wonderful. Made me feel all lovey dovey inside.
Don't rush it on the lemon, I feel comfortable with the pace it's going with right now :)

Awesome story. I love it. Update soon.

Very, very nice. I anjoy this whole story very much, and I can actually picture the characters saying and doing the things you write. (Except Kurama readding romanc novels... But anyway.)

You mentioned a lemon when Hiei makes up his mind. That can be interpretted several ways. Maybe he decides he loves Kurama, and they have their long awaited lemon. Or maybe he rejects Kurama, and Kurama runs back to Makai and has a lemon with Yomi, or stays in Ningenkai and has a lemon with some unsuspecting fangirl (Mary Sue?). Or maybe Kurama pushes Hiei too far, and the hiyoukai grabs the first thing he can lay his hands on to chuck at the fox, and that thing is a steaming lemon! (Doesn't everyone have one of those sitting in their bedroom?)

I'm sorry, I am in a really funkified mood right now, and I have not had much sleep over the past few days. I will keep my lame comments to myself now, and simply leave you with this: I like your story very much and look forward to your updates.

Ah. Still wonderful. Hiei is so cute! Granted, so is Kurama, but he's more hot. So is Hiei, though, in an evil, dangerous sort of way. Well, I'll let you continue. This is one of the best Kurama/Hiei romances I've read.

Yeah. that Hiei alright. So far you're doing a wonderful job at this. I like the lime thing. Very good. Now, write the next chapter! Ack! I'm spazzing! What happens next! Ok, I'm fine now. My favorite was that last Yuusuke scene.

Does the song "Bad to the Bone" ever put you in mind of Hiei? That song and "Hold on Loosely" both played while I read this fic, making the ficcie go from totally, incredibly HOT to Inferno hot!!

Great story.. and by the way, nice way to tease Yusuke!! Will he always be Hiei's uhh... test subject.....

and did Yusuke actually enjoy Hiei kissing him???

yes! very nice imagry.. i could so see it... *sighs* how sweet.. heh. even if it was rash.. and unintentionally sweet. lol. ^^ you know i love it. ^__^

Is Hiei going to Yusuke? I hope so it would be sooo funny to see his reaction as Hiei tries to find his answers. I can't wait the suspense is killing me.

Ok, usually I'm not the fangirlish, squeeling type but I must admit this fic is testing me. I love this couple and I love it even more when they're in character. The more in character the more I like it. I hope you write more soon, I'll be sure to keep watching for updates.

your story is so good! and the j/k ch. 5 made me laugh out loud! :D <-- me laughing! anyway, don't give up on your writing; you do it well. i also apreciate how hiei and kurama aren't OOC. please update soon!!