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Awesome. I liked the fact that there was no rushing and they weren't OOC. Thanks for the
'fake' chapter 5, it was a good one!

Well, I have been checking daily to see whether there is an update or not, but alas, nothing yet so far. This is such a wonderful, well-written, witty and
captivating piece of work, it is cruel to leave us readers hanging like this, you know. I hope your muse is working overtime right now, and yes, update soon.

With a story as good as this, you really shouldn't be having any self esteem issues. Please write more soon.

*glomp*

I'm not finished yet, but GAH. Finally! Almost every story I'd read has Kurama practically a lesbian and Hiei some wide eyed innocent virgin. Very wel written.

Very nice. Please, don't worry about this story being bad. It's so far ahead of anything else I've ever read in this category that it could never be considered bad by any stretch of the word. Unless the world got reversed somehow... which would be interesting, but not if it meant that everything that was good turned bad. That would be bad. Bleh- I need to sleep. Keep writing, and thanks for sharing. =]

Great chapter. I hope there's more, it almost sounds like the end. I think Hiei needs to be on the receiving end of Kurama's experience.

That was actually pretty well. Hiei's opening up to Kurama took time and I like that. Shiori walking to check on them is so hilarious. I'm just glad she didn't come in while Hiei was pleasuring kurama. YAYNESS!

There is no need for self-esteem problems on your end.

Still written wonderfully, I loved the lime scene and how you portrayed Hiei's inexperience, very accuate. You have truly kept them in character.

More, I demand more!

And lemons! yes! Lemons!

I thought it was great. One of the best attributes of your writing is that you keep the guys "in character" to a degree, but allow them to grow. Let me explain that; it is a compliment. You started with the guys completely in character. Now, to someone who only read this chapter, they may seem "out of character" in that they are doing this at all. But the progression of the story puts them "in character" in this chapter, giving them a believable behavior, but allowing you the artistic license to do as you please. That's the really wordy way of saying I like where you're going and how you're getting there. I look forward to more.

I really like where you are taking this fic. You are one of the few people who has come close to representing what this couple would be like if it were canon. There are thousands of different takes that could be plausible but there are not enough talented writers to explore them all. Every time I read a new chapter I end with a smile on my face.

I also wanted to say that I don't think you should ever fear bad reviews if you even have one person who likes what you are writing. For every good review there will be ten or twenty bad sometimes, just remember that one word of praise is worth ten curses thrown in your face, because that one is definately sincere.

I can't wait for the next installment! Thank you.