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for ~Once Burned~

by Metranome

person Neko_Chaos
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Hey, I loved your story! It was one of the best Hiei/Kurama pairings i've ever read. i was laughing most of the way through, you have a wonderful way with words.
I absolutly loved that Just Kidding! Omake chapter... I was almost rolling on the ground in tears of mirth! I'm going to read your other stories as well some time.
My muse is no harping one me to get my Koenma/ Yuuske story into full swing so I can post it. Keep up the fabulous writing. You should write a Hiei/Yuuske pairing! *Wink Wink.*
person MultifacetedTune
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And I have finished reading it!!! *hugs you and gives you chocolates* Absolutely wonderful ending -- I loved it!!! And you kept them in character until the very end, so congrats! *more random hugs and chocolate giving* ^^ Keep up the good work -- I hope that you continue to write stories like this one!!! Ja!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just stumbled upon this fic at random and I'm currently only through the first three chapters, but I just have to say something: you rock!!! ^^ No, really, I absolutely adore this: your summery was very clever (and true, lol; good job!), and I'm still laughing over your first three "paragraphs" (a.k.a. two paragraphs and a sentance). I look forward to reading more and finding out what happens next........as a matter of fact, I'm going to go do that now! ^___~ Oh, and btw... “Honestly, ningens and their unnecessary emotional complexities!” That's a classic!!! *still laughing her ass off* Later!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh *gasp* My God *gasp* Chapter 5 was sooooooooo funny!!! *dies laughing* .............. *is revived by some unknown force so that she can continue reviewing* Hmm, very clever! I liked chapter 4, too -- "sappy" and cute without being......well, like chapter 5!!! ^___~ Oh, and one thing I forgot to mention in my first review: did you come up with the "test of the Emergency Idiot Broadcast System" on your own? 'Cause it's pure genious!!! ^^ Ja ne! *scampers off to read chapter 6*
person Akela
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i laughed and cried(among other things) over this fic...... very well written..... my approval, dear writer!!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I was about to read chapter 9 when my Mom decided that I needed to get off the computer and get some exercise. *mudders something about stupid parents* Anyways, I figured I might as well review and then come back later and finish reading your fic -- it won't hurt, and this way you'll get another review, too, lol. So anyway~ ^^ I loved the last two chapters (7 and 8) -- very cute and still realistically in chaaracter. Oh, and I'm sorry to hear (read) about your "accident"...... though I must say, your account of it was quite amusing, to say the least. And yes, I do know what you mean, 'cause I have one of those damned heavy bookcases, too........... ^___~ Anyways, it's good to know that you're feeling better (despite the fact that my condolances are proabably very belated) and I look forward to reading the last chapter (posted, at least) of your wonderful in-character fic ASAP! *gets kicked off the computer* Dammit! Mom, when did you forget the fact that I'm an adult??? *gets threatened with grounding* >.< Fine, fine, I'm getting off.......... *longsuffering sigh* Ja ne!!!
person Vile Deadboss
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the Best~!
person Ripe wickeD plUm (not logged in)
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Very nice. =]
person December Wind
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful...
I've been reading this fic from its very first chapter and I'm still just as giddy about it now.
Love your writing~!
person Mora
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That I will have to say is the best YuYu fic I have ever read. You seem to know the characters very well and portrayed them wounderfully. Great job and keep up the good work!