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for ~Once Burned~

by Metranome

person kazhdu
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Just a note to say that I really enjoyed this story and hope to read more of you soon!

Ciao

Kazhdu
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The sap was a little strong in this last part, especially after all of Hiei's reticence in previous chapters. A year hardly constitutes forever and a day. But... seeing as the rest of its so nice, I'll buy some sap and add it to my nice little ficcy sandwich. =] A pleasure to read- thanks for sharing.
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I enjoyed it a lot. I hope you write more H&K stories.
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, just beautiful. I loved how you neatly tied everything together and I just loved the last few paragraphs.

I'm holding you to what you said in the author's note - don't let this be the last YYH fic you write!

One of the best fics out there - I even got my boyfriend to read it!
person Sesshomarulover132
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KuramaXhiei forever!!!! Your story is Awsome!!!
person arrowolight
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this is the end! Well, a very good and fit ending I must say, just like everthing else about this fic. Thank you for your hard work. Now, we will just sit back and wait for another Hiei/Kurama fic from you. No pressure, but all your loyal readers are waiting *_*. Ja for now.
person Sammi
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This made me feel all warm on the inside. I loved how you actually tried to keep Hiei and Kurama in-character, and didn't rush it so they could have sex. Well done.
^-^
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I liked it. A lot. Very nicely written, and very in-character. Bravo!
person Everqueen
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, the only thing I can say is. "I LOVE THE EPILOGUE" lol. Very sweet and hot too. Thanks for such a great story.
person hColleen
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written :D I muchly enjoyed this story and look forward to what you write next. Much kudos and praise to you :D