rate_review Reviews

Interesting and incredibly well written so far... you've certainly kept your promise of no OOC's ne? ^^ Looking forward to reading the rest.

story was incredible.with two kids and no computer of my own,I don't get to read fanfics very much, but I'm glad I chose this one! please write more soon!

Really, really enjoyed this story. You weren't lying when you said this would be more in character, it certainly was. I enjoyed seeing both sides of the story, and most of all could see Hiei deciding to do a little research. Straight, and to the point, he certainly is. Thanks for writing.

*Sigh* I know I have revied this once already... But that was before I had inished reading it. I had put you in my Recomended Reading, but something happened with Aff.net and I lost the code...and oddly enough, still can't find it. I'll likely e-mail you and ask you for it... Anyways, on to a review here. I must say from one In Character author to another... BRAVO DAMN IT! That was one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. Oh your descriptions are to die for! Can I eat your brain and steal your talent? Maybe then I'd get some bloody reviews! Lol! No seriously Metranome, this left me almost speechless, there are only a few minor details that I could see you fixing, most of which I can't really remember now anyways. I am so happy to see a male writer on the site... Okay, let me correct that, a male yaoi writer on the site. It's refreshing and I never thought anyone could do something so profoundly beautiful with description and not have me snoozing on my keyboard. It was awsome Met.

*Randome huggles from one author to the next*

~BWinner

Ooh, that was adorable. It was cute. I've seen many different interpretations of the characters (expecially Hiei), but it was really quite endearing how you played up Hiei's naivete and childlike qualities. Thanks for writing this one.

I see before me a true work of art, and it goes something like this:

"r u an idiot u had nice story there then u just ruin it at the end STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"I would personally like to thank the anonymous reviewer who left me that bit of praise, and remind said reviewer that it isn't nice to flame when you can't even spell "you" or "are." Have a Nice Day. :)"

Ah, laughter didst flow like rich wine, and you are now a 398 out of 10 on the 'awesome use of sarcasm against imbeciles' scale. Thanks for the wonderful story and equally fabulous side comments. You rock! Have a nice day! ^_^

that story was so good. your summary was exactly right. you managed to make them fall in love without making either of them out of character. that was wonderful! even at the end, you still had Hiei acting like himself. very few authors can do that, and you have just been added to my list of those few! great job! this story was awesome! i look forward to reading other YYH fics by you. ttfn!

That was good, very good, I hope to see more work from you. On and in one of the chapters you said you saw Hiei smile, he does in the movie, when he transformed he smiled and looked like a imp, a very sexey imp but a imp.

Hey just wanted to say that this is a really good chapter and that the imagery was excellent, hiei smirks a lot in yyh, but he laughs/smiles when he is in makai during the chapter black saga.
thanks for the chapter zing

I absolutely loved the epilogue -- it wrapped up things quite nicely. And again, congrats on a job well done; I look forward to reading another one of your fics in the future! ^___~ Until then,

~MultifacetedTune