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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i got very naseous but you'll be proud hear that i didn't puke....though i am waiting for the nausea to wear off
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh!!! It hurts so much, here I was expecting a continuation of your wonderful fic, and then reading that, it was all that I could do to read the whole thing through. I might get a twitch thinking about it... I am shuddering right now! You are right, that never should have been written!
Okay, I am better now (I might be scared forever though), I can't wait for the continuation of "Once Burned." Have a good day!
Okay, I am better now (I might be scared forever though), I can't wait for the continuation of "Once Burned." Have a good day!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting....Yusuke makes such a good guinne pig, doesn't he? lol I liked your fake chapter 5...it was funny...it seems that mary sue bashing and cliche tearing are de rigure recently...it's fun :D I look forward to more :D And aren't idiot reviewers the....most annoying creatures? They're worse than mary sues.
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
r u an idiot u had nice story there then u just ruin it at the end STUPID STUPID STUPID STUPID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Couldn't stop laughing while reading your parody chapter. On one hand it's sad that those kinds of stories are so prevalent, but your send up of them was just too funny. It's nice to read a story that really cares about keeping the guys in character and I hope you can keep posting for all of us who appreciate it. Looking forward to your lemon!
Isabeau
Isabeau
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha... holy shit, that cracked me up! though you left out the part where they use hair gel as lubricant, mark each other as mates and hiei gets pregnant... what's even funnier though is those people who flamed you as they obviously can't take a joke. anyway, i look forward to your next *ahem* real chapter :)
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good fanfic, even though I'm not a fan of the pairing. And the satire!omake at teh end was hilarious. <3
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved your last little chapter. I am new to yu yu fanfics but love kurama x Hiei pairing. Finding one that is not a complete waste of time is another story. I have loved what you have written so far.
Keep up the great work.
Keep up the great work.
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do a wonderful job of keeping everyone IC. I have found a few other authors that do this well but the numbers are few. Keep up the great work.
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you're doing an excellent job building up this relationship. The pace of it is feasable and the character's thoughts really give the story some depth. This is probably the only H/K I'll every read! Keep up the good work.