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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^____________________________________^ LOVE IT!! HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love the story! It is really nice to see Hiei and Kurama acting like their normal selves. I hadn't relized how much I had gotten used to their normal fanfiction personalities until I read this. Yusuke is a guinea pig =). Sorry, I just loved that part. Don't leave me hangin'. Keep writing!

This is a beautiful story. While I'm not sure I believe your "IC" assertion, I like the way you write. The first chapter hooked me and so far everything else has been lovely. Your omake had me rolling on the floor, alternately laughing my ass off and thinking "dear god, yes, I have read tripe like that." =]
Don't let stupid people get to you. Take comfort in the fact that your brain is large enough to accomadate three letter words instead of just one... ;b Yeah, I'm being bitchy, but it's late and I haven't had my caffine. I'm just gonna leave now... But I'll be back.
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i like the story so far. this chp i thought it was funny when yusuke called hiei a lil pychopath lol. the other chpt 5 was u in one of those scarastic moods and just wantd to see what everyone would say if u ended that way? just curious. ne ways pls update soon.

I've been flamed by the literarily challenged too. It's pretty funny actually. As for the chapter before all I can say is that sometimes you just have to get something out of your system.


Now, to the most recent chapter. Loved it. I like how Hiei's thoughts are confused on the whole relationship thing. And the experiment with Yusuke was pricless. Keep it up!

This story is fantastic! though did cringe and laugh at the joke fic. (would of been scared too if didn't see the note above.)
Please do continue! looking forward to read more.

I like this story. You are sticking true to their characters and that is so pleasant. I'm never able to do that with hiei/kurama pairings, so i bow in awe to your coolness. The last chapter, by the way, was hilarious. I do hope it was just a joke on all of us OC hiei/kurama writters out there and you continue to dazzle us with your awesome story.

I liked both your fake and real chapters. It's fun to intorduce the parody every now and then. (I'm currently working on a Marty Sue comedy, myself.)

Now, about that reviewer: you need to put things into perspective. "You" and "are" are very difficult words to spell out all the time. I mean, that's TWO extra keys strokes per word! That would have been SIX whole keys strokes more in that one review! Really, anonymous persons are far too busy to be bothered by six additional keystrokes. And then there is the whole business of "are" vs "our". I mean, really, it's just as confusing as "your" and "you're", "thier", "there", and "they're", and let's not even mention the difficulties that "you" and "ewe" present! Our very busy and anonymous flamers* simply cannot be expected to dedicate even a meager portion of their (there? they're?) full and self-actuated existances to petty matters such as grammar and spelling. Overall, I think this person did you a favor by using "u" and "r". Now, if they could do you a favor involving a long walk and a short pier, we could all be that much more blessed by it.

I hope the above was received as intended, a la chapter five. ^_~ *=please note, jab directed at anon flamers only. Anon CC and Anon praise is exempt from the above.

All that, and I screwed up the word "their". Ugh. I wish these review thingers had spell checker. Sorry about that. Y_Y

What a great "real" chapter. Hiei kissing Yusuke was particularly amusing. I can see Hiei doing something like that, needing a "second" opinion. Couldn't see him doing that to Kuwabara though rofl. And he does respect Yusuke.