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it cut off half of my review before, so here it is again. *grumbles* anyway, I said that i love how you keep kurama and hiei in character so well. please update soon! we all love it so much (well the ones of us who DO love your story anyway...).

Thank God their is someone out their that can actually right a Kurama/Hiei story without making the boys so ooc! Great beginning by the way. I've read my fair share of Kurama/Hiei stories but they all seemed to be so out of character. What with Hiei being described as this petite almost effeminine guy with the ripped body; it doesn't make sense. Or the Kurama with the girly green eyes and red mane. Not that I don't enjoy reading them, but its sometimes better if the author could keep the characters as they are in the actual series. You have done a fabulous job so far what with making Kurama wonder what made him feel attracted to the fire demon if he isn't what they call beautiful. And pointing out that the small demon tends to be rude and all around a nasty person. Good job!

Me again! Alright, nice second chapter and I must give you credit on Hiei's reaction to the kiss. Thank goodness you didn't make Hiei evaluate his feelings and suddenly come to the conclusion that he himself is in love with Kurama; that would of ruined what you have so far. Oh, and thank you for keeping the shappyness to a minimum. I don't think my stomach could of taken Kurama and Hiei declaring their love for one another and automatically jumping into bed to have a round of wild demon sex. (Not that I don't mind reading a lemon once in a while between my two favorite demons) LOL.

That, my friend, was a funny chapter. I didn't know Hiei was that daring as to kiss Yusuke on the lips. But oh well, it did help him in the end, now didn't it? Poor Yusuke! Having to be force to think 'happy thoughts' that included Keiko. LOL. Do cold showers actually work?

Well, I've seen Hiei laugh and that was during the Sensui case, when Yusuke, after waking up, went to demon world. I loved that episode. He looked so child like when he was laughing, along with Youko, when Yusuke complained about his heart no beating as it used to. Good work on your blow job and the encounter between Hiei and Shiori. In other stories I've read, Hiei is completely silent when he meets Kurama's human mother. Oh, and Shiori is usually ignorant about her son's relationship. It's refreashing to read a fic where Shiori is not that stupid and blind that she doesn't notice her son's strange behavior. And that Hiei could hold a conversation with a human longer than his usual 'Hn'. I hope you had a lovely vacation and have more chapters for us hungry readers. We can't seem to have enough. LOL.

WONDERFUL - you keep them in charcter so well! This is one of the most well-written stories out there.

Please, post more!

This isn't just a good H/K, but it also a damn good romance in general. The part where Hiei revealed himself to Kurama's human mother was a realy nice touch. Great chapter not to mention really hot too!

yay for new chapters! your story continues to be one of my favorite yyh fics, and i think the added description is really good. the fact that you considered my advice made me feel all special :) anyway, i loved the scene with yusuke, he's such a great character who i feel is not used nearly enough in most fanfics. it would be cool if you could incorporate some of the other characters into the story as well. and great job on the lemon... i like how you kept it pretty simple rather than getting into some log drawn-out kinky sex right away... not that i'd be against reading that... heh... and i agree that hiei can be rash. he's often portrayed in fanfic as being very cool and level-headed, which is typically true but his ego does get the better of him quite a few times in the series. no criticisms this time, though you did write that kurama had 'read' hair at one point... yeah now i'm just being anal :P can't wait to read more, and enjoy your vacation!

Update!!! Please!!!!! I wanna know wat happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice lemon (Grins like a maniac)
I love the way Hiei seemed to form a definition for sex. God, that was cute. (Not to mention very Hiei-ish)
And, yes, Hiei is rash. In a different way from Yusuke to be sure, but in his own, very self-centered way.

I'm loving your fic~v