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for Breaking In The Team

by ss_dragon_lady

person blu_dragon
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think u should cont w/ the story. its really good. pls update soon. as for the nxt teammate u can decide that. lol.
person Koorime1905
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tee-hee,I don't belive it you wrote three some????Did I dreaming,hit me!!!.To say the truth,i know that you will write a three some when I have read your fic for th fiest time but I just guess it will be Yusuke,Kurama,Hiei or Youko,Kurama,Hiei,I never think about Koenma.you make me nearly frozen,you know ^_^.Anyway,please update soon,i'm so impatient to see what heppen next.
person dragon
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Off to a good start. Definately "do" all of the team!
person Katzztar
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop! Let them go for the others, ALL of the team!That means not only Yusuke, but Botan and Kuwabara too.
It would be funny for them to find that Kuwabra isn't a virgin or inexperienced while Yusuke is a virgin.

Everyone always makes Kuwabara out to be clueless about sex.

Many igore that for all the gropingof Keiko that Yusuke does - that is all he does.
person Katzztar again
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eppp I wasn't finnifhed yet!

The reason I fantize Kuwabara not being a virgin is that he is a gang leader. There are some sites that go further and say he's a gang lord. That would mean thta his gang has more than Okubo, Kirishima & Sawamura in it. Sex is a reatily of gang life so that's why I thinks there's a good chance Kuwa's not a virgin ;)
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is totally cool. Please continue with more pairings. I like that Hiei and Kurama are mates and had been together before Kurama was killed. That's a nice twist. Great job!
person shiorifoxiesmom
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Definately 'do' everyone.
person v
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going, i think they should go for either yusuke or kuwabara next .