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for Breaking In The Team

by ss_dragon_lady

schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm intersted. I really like the concept and I'd like to see more. So, I'll keep an eye out for more chapters, yes? Yes. Good. Until then.
person 66Hiei08
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one will be waiting almost impatiently for the next chapter. I already know the ones I can't wait to see. I'm also wondering if Genkai and Shizuru will be 'involved'? LOL
person papapapuffy
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue this story x3
person Inusessgirl
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is real good are planning on finishing it
person loneylust
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!!!!! Well I love any Kurama Hiei pairing, but the story line for them to break in the rest of the team is awesome!!
person XxBatsxX
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS FUCKING AWSOME!!!!!!!!! The kinkiest story EVA! This story is gonna be like "THE BEST FUCKING STORY EVA!!" Whoooo! I could have never thought up something like that! 5 FUCKING STARS! All your story's are Brilliant. You need a medal. 8D where do you come up with this stuff? ........................ I love it :3
person nette
schedule May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i found this story to be well....very....interesting. i feel sorry for koenma, his ego gettin bruised and all but hey he had to learn the hard way for interruptin. i can't wait to read the rest to find out how they are going to get the rest of the team, especially kuwabara, that chapter should be hilarious. keep up the good work, i luv readin your stories and would lik to know if you could help me out with mine. anyway can't wait to read the next one.
person phoenixfirekitsune
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if you are going to continue writing this story. I am glad that you are updating your story arc but I think that this would be a good story to continue as well. If you do not wish to continue, then I hope that you finish your story arc.
person Evelyn
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And some people ask- Where is the love? Well, now I have a good answer. If you dont already have everything planned out I would like to suggest your next chapter as them getting Yusuke. Maybe in a deserted park (at night, of course). Oh and I wouldn't mind if Yusuke refused, but they really had to have him, so they tied him up. Maybe with a swing. And even though Yusuke's a super punk, not to mention a perv, but who isn't these days, he strikes me as naive and innocent, so he'd probably be a virgin. A super, straight as an arrow, virgin, thus the tieing up. (It would be sorta boring if everyone consented)

But, of course you're the master storywriter here, not me. :) This is gonna be good, so hurry up and write it, God. Just kidding. (Smile, Smile)
Eve
P.S. I know it's alot to ask, but could you email me when you finish the next chapter.
Thanks
person Aikou Yami
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantasic, I loved every minute of it. I can't wait until the next chapter. Keep up the excellent work.