rate_review Reviews

hehe I loved the humor of it.

Hey, The Green Knight,
yes something like that but it did not work out as i wished it would!
anyway, what do you mean with the wrong comment? never heard that before in that meaning.
thanks for the comment!
Suryallee

The phrase "that was wrong" is a slang term that refers to something that is both funny and mean. I was talking about Kurama— very funny.

Hehehehe... that was so wrong. Question, did you mean to be in verse?

Thanks!

I thought It was cute! Good job.

Hahahaha... you made Kurama a furry dwarf. That won't sit well with Kurama fangirls.

Yeah, Well, Im a kid at heart, so I really like this, although Hiei, HIEIEIEIEIEIEIEIIEIEIEIIEIEIEIEIEI!!!!!! and Kazuma!!!!!! Together!!!!!!!!!!! Doing naught things! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!

Yep, okay, sorry bout that, had to get it out of my system, you know how it is. Anyways, continue this soon, it ROCKS!!!
^=^
Eve

XD Gods I loved this!
I was quite surprised at the fact teh first elf was Kyoshi Mitari ...or is that Mitari Kyoshi.... It all depends on which form you prefer.. teh western given name first followed by family name. Or the Japanese form of family name first followed by given name. *shrugs shoulders*

I knew you hve great ideas for stories, it the pesky fact of having to translate them that creates the problems. I'm glad you have a beta that han help you in that regard. Iloved this story.

I was wondering, do you know about fanfiction.net? It's a site where anything from G rated to R rated stories can be posted, vervus this site which is mainly for R and NC-17 works.

I thought that was quite entertaining... of course if it were me... much worse (lemony) things would happen! *cackles evilly* Good job! I woulkd have made it longer just 'cause I'm wondering what Kurama's up to in fairy tale land!