rate_review Reviews

Great story!!!
Saddend that you left it where you did...
Would have loved to read more!!!!
It just got really intersting!!!!

… And as the one year mark draws ever closer with each passing second, a young girl’s hope slowly diminishes for Hiei and Kuwabara fanciers everywhere… But, it should be noted, this particular girl is incredibly prone to overly melodramatic outbursts, and should be vehemently ignored, if at all possible.

Oh, there the girl is now! Everybody, hide yourselves! Maybe we can-

“Oh, hello.”

Damn! We’re too late. Well, I guess we are going to have to submit ourselves to yet another longwinded speech about the indignities of-

“Oh, no, I’m over that.”

… Seriously?

“Um, yeah, totally.”

Oh… That’s great!

“Yeah, I know… I don‘t do the whole ‘argumentative, belligerent, confrontational, dramatic’ thing, anymore… I’m down to calmly begging! Although, my ability to do so is greatly impeded when I can only type… It sort of loses its effect…”

… Damnit. You know, this makes for a very strange review, right?

“Yes, yes, I can see how this could be construed as somewhat strange… But, I couldn’t think of any other way to do this!”

Freak.

“Whatever, My Ability to Write. And- Hey! What is with that first line?! You make me sound like I’m trying to put the writer on a guilt-trip!”

But, you are, aren’t you? That seems to be the way you get everything you want.

“Hey! Guilt-tripping is perfectly fair play! And anyway, no, I am not trying to use guilt to make the, obviously very busy, writer continue. I am ‘not’ that callous. Now quit being a professional Jerk-face and get to the point of this infernal thing!”

Very well, you impetuous idiot… Alright, this girl likes this story, and, consequently, wishes for it to continue, and hopefully, finish. She understands that it will take a while, but she is willing to wait months, which she has already proven, for more of it, no matter how small the amount. She understands that you, the writer, are busy with life, and have no obligation to do a damn thing she asks of you… But, she would like it, as a lover of HieiKuwa, and even more so as a lover of just Kazuma Kuwabara, if you would send her more of this story. Again, no matter how small the amount. It doesn’t have to be an entire chapter. A few paragraphs would appease her.

“Yeah, I won’t get greedy! Or start thinking you’re required to do anything. I know you’ve got your own life to live. Besides, I can be very patient for the things I want…”

Not from what I’ve seen.

“Shut up, MAW. This is different.”

Heh. Oh, yes. This girl realizes that she needs to acquire a life. But, she thinks you should know, that is very hard to do when you are home-schooled and live in the middle of nowhere with no means of transportation besides your-

“Hey! Don’t give information like that out to a stranger! Even if it is an admittedly talented writer of a stranger…”

Anyway, this is getting very, very long. The poor writer probably doesn’t even have time to read it… That is, if the writer ever comes back to read it at all.

“Hey! Don’t say that! It makes it hard to stay optimistic. I need my optimism, I’d die without it!”

Drama-Queen. Ugh, let’s end this, already!

“Oh, fine. Please, cher auteur, listen to my plea. I am not exaggerating when I say it would make my life right now. I have nothing better to do than serf around the web, doing little more than search for Kuwabara stories, and I think that I‘ve found them all. Yes, my life is that boring and, yes, I love Kuwabara that much… Please, plea-”

Do you really have to be on your knees like that?

“I thought it added to the whole ‘begging’ atmosphere. Why?”

No reason… Alright, that’s it, this is way too long, and it proves that you have way too much time on your hands. I’m ending it.

“Wait! I wasn’t done- Oh, you’re right. I’ll stop. Au revoir, cher auteur!”

Same here… Oh, and have a pleasant day, too.

PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!! It is a really good story.

Wow! I loved this! Seriously, there aren't enough Hiei/Kuwabara fics out there! Please keep writing this! I loved it!

I was just talking to a friend of mine about how much I enjoyed this story. While I was on the phone with her, I checked to see if you had updated and imagine my shock/joy/relief that you had. I wish I had checked sooner. That was a good chapter. I like the fight between Kuwabara and Hiei, so believable. I could picture everything that happened. I hope you update soon, but if you can't that's okay too. Just let me know when you are able too, you know where to find me.

Yah!!! YOu finally updated this ^^. I just love this story ^^. I've been wondering...is any of the rest of the group going to enter in someway or another? You already had Koenma and Ayamne, I can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve ^^. And I understand you got a life ^^. Trust me...I still need to work on my own stories ^^; *shutters at the reviewers/readers ready to kill her for Binding Souls and And the Father Is... * Well anyway, keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more of this awesome story and take your time, but not toooo long ^_~.

oh, this will not go well. but hopefully in that all so funny way. question, did kuwa-chan and yusuke know eachother when they were younger in this?

yay! i love so much! plz, give me more! MORE!...oh sorry, peeps. Give US more! MORE!....US!

It's okay to make us wait because your stories are amazing, no doubt about it. I LOVE all your other Kuwa stories, so I only expect great things from this new (well not really) story...no pressure though! However, if you do keep us waiting again ::shakes fist:: expect something bad...no, I don't have the heart. Just update soon!

ooooh....interesting. more plz!