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I really like the way this has gone. It is too bad that it has to end, but then, as they say "All good things must come to an end." Thank you for this!

I loved chapters 5 and 6. I thought I had reviewed 5 but I see that I didn't, sorry. Anyway. Hiei is so sweet and cute. I love the way he shows his love through his actions. The way he washes them all off after sex is a really sweet touch. I like the way you handled the mother's. Yusuke's mom's reaction was perfect. Of course she would accept Yusuke being with a guy. In the series, although it may have been cut from the Cartoon Network airing, she's friends with, I think, crossdressers or transvestites. So I would think that she would be open to almost anything. I loved the insight and care and thoughtfulness from Hiei and Kurama regarding Yusuke's feelings. You map everything out so well. It all makes so much sense. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^

great chapter i loved kurama moms question and how she made yusuke nervious and i can't wait for the next chapter.

hehe, i think that your writing gets even better everytime you write another chapter! i really enjoyed this one and can't wait for another update!

Group bath, sounds fun. I think they need to all move in together in a house with a bigger tub, though. I really like the way you painted Shiori's reaction and the arrangement they have worked out. It sounds unusually accomodating on Hiei's behalf, but throughout this story and Truth, Dice, or Dare you depicted Hiei as having a very warm, gentle side hidden behind the Wall of Hn. So in this story, it fits him well.

I vote that we get to read the reactions. Unless you already have Atsuko's reaction worked out, I imagine that would be difficult to write. But I would love to read it, and Shiori's reaction. Whichkever you decide to do, I look forward to your next update.

More please. Great chapter.

yes i want genkai and shiori and asuko reaction. you must do them even though i can kind of see how they will react.

I want to hear the othre reaction. then the last chapter. yup yup.

definantly another wonderful chapter though I must wonder why so many authors have Hiei as an Ice Cream addict it is kinda weird.

awsome chapter! *bows down and worshis you* as for your question i wouldn't mind reading Atsuko's and Shiori's reactions =3 but not really Genkai's