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Gah! That's not a nice place to stop. Okay, Keiko may not be on her way to Grandma's, but my best guess is still Little Red Riding Hood because of the red underwear. And despite the logic that says that he doesn't actually turn into a wolf, it's just a nickname, I can't get Saitou out of my head. But that could just be wishful thinking... Hopefully the world will know someday (not to mention getting our hands on what promises to be a very nice chapter two). Oh, and in the interest of actually doing something intelligent with this review, I liked that Yusuke temporarily showed promise, seeing him do something good helped explain why she didn't just give up on him a long time ago (and actually, I think, makes it tougher all around- the yo-yo effect), but the section where she decides to move on from Yusuke stretches on for quite a while, longer, methinks, than it needed to. This review is long enough now :P

Are you ever going to update? Please!

Very very descriptive. I could see it very clearly but remember don't use too many words then it becomes a burden to read it all. ^^ Just a helpful hint don't take offense. Great chapter! I love it!! Update ^^

-InTheShadows.

aren't you going to continue?

this was great!! ^____^ write more!
Oh and was the fairy tale Little Red Riding houd?

LOVE IT!!!!! Is the man one of our yummy villans???

I realy have no idea who the hunter is , but i would like to find out soon! I mean soon!Please Please Please Please Please!!!!!!It was realy good!

I bet it's either Inuyasha or (hopefully) Seshoumaru. Please update soon, I need to know who it is!!!

it's inuyasha! well, i dunno for sure. but at least i guessed!

update soon plz. i wanna know!

and i loved it!