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for Four Days Later

by whirleeq

person Kogas Hentai Luver
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely done. Hot and sexy with lots of passion. You had me glued to the monitor. You got me all hot so I'm going to go work on my fic now. The best time to write a lemon is when you're horny as hell and since my husband has already gone to sleep, I'll have to take out my frustration by writing smutty fiction, hehehehe. Once again, great fic. I'll be printing this one up for my box of hot Yus/Kur fics. LOL ^_~
person BWinner(Not signed in)
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SECOND LEMON!? Gods I should be beating you with a stick! I've ben writing lemons for years and they still aren't as good as that! Ahem, forgive the outburst... Anways, yes, as you can see I liked this story very much and am very impressed with it. The plot was great and you captured the personalities of the characters wonderfully. I must say bravo and keep writing, we like that hentai mind of yous. ^_~
person rayray
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!! I REALLY ENJOY NC-17 YAOI FANFICS LIKE FAKE, YUGI, AND YU YU. THE PAIR ARE FUN AND ARE SOMTIMES MEANT TO BE! GET WRITING, YOU'RE REALLY GREAT! LOVE, HOPE TO READ MORE! PEACE OUT!!!
person Altar of Wishes
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was yummy! Sorry for comment being so short... I have nothing else to say! ^__^;;
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow! Very yummy, will there perhaps be a second chapter with Hiei and Keiko? Great job :)