rate_review Reviews

You'll be pleased to know this chapter got a couple of verbal responses...I said "Oh, hell" when Yomi showed up and "Bloody hell" when Hiei left with him...as you can see, I don't swear a lot....and when I do, it's weird....okay, now for my review...

What in the bloody hell does Yomi think he can gain by taking Hiei????? Unfortunately, I have to leave it at that because I've gotta go...but I did enjoy it and look forward to the next.

MEANIE! Please update soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^

OMG! YOU MUST MUST MUST MUST MUST UPDATE! Will the baby Hiei's carrying survive? If it does, will it be a boy or a girl? That one question kept coming to my mind. I VOTE ON GIRL! lol. Well it's your story and a mighty good one at that so it's your choice of course! ^_^ But seriously I vote girl WITHOUT fox ears and tail cuz the other kit already has that! ^_^ and how about black hair and...oops...your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not mine! So not mine! Yours! Your choice! Sorry! But please update! Pretty please?

NOOO! Not Hiei in the clutches of Yomi. And from what Yomi said, Hiei may be on Yomi's list of things to do! I hope the hiyoukai's condition protects him. Yomi wants an hier of Kurama's blood, so I am really hoping that he won't molest Hiei while Kurama's kit is being carried. After all the two demons went trhough learning to trust and give themselves to each other, having one taken forcefully would shatter him, and his mate. I hope Toushi is alright, too. I usually despise OCs, but the little guy has really grown on me. Most likely because he is an OC that isn't trying to steal the show. And he makes my two favorite demons act so darn cute! (Don't tell Hiei I said that...) I am also very fond of your fic about the first day together. These go very well together, and I am glad you wrote them as separate fics. One is cute, one is angsty. I think I may need to go reread that cute one to get over this chapter, though!

This was a great update, but I dread the week I will have to wait to read more! I need to know what happens. And Kurama may have told his teammates about the mating and about Toushi, but he neglected a certain detail Hiei carries with him. This could get complicated. I am also looking forward to Yukina learning of Hiei's delicate condition, as she will most certainly understand what that means in relation to herself. (Pathetic pun intended.)

As always, another brilliant chapter. But I would expect nothing less. THis has to be one of my favorite stories here. And I am always scrambling on here all the time to see if you update. Imagine my happiness whenever I see you have. I am greatly looking forward to the next chapter!! I feel so sorry for Hiei, he's constant leverage for Yomi and Kurama's poor emotions are always thrown into the ringer because of it. But it makes for great fic drama ^___^ Keep up the fantastic work!!! And I will keep reading!

ok im goin crazy here. damn computers. but i finally could read and review and i truely did SOOO not expect the wolf-kit. but i had thought of that, not the wolf breed per say but...whatever. oh well, this is still kick ass of a story. ill email you my pic i drew, of a boy and/or girl. i may even add another kit...heh...just for interest sake. i hope it looks ok when done. I just really wanted to see him have twins...oh well...i cant wait for the next chappie tho. cause i love the secrets unfold stories the best! ja!

my mustles were alot better until yesterday when i had to do some planting and raking. ._. but i'm already better XD i really enjoyed this chapter. and can't wait to see what happens with botan and when they tell everyone about their relationship, the kit and their new baby ^.^

So....maybe Yomi died...hmmm....I'm gonna have to go reread that....I dislike the answer "maybe"...makes me think suspicious things...Yays for Hiei being such a sweet....daddy....poor Kurama having to miss such important things because of work....blech work...and horrid cliffy....

To cool so far,and I'm glad you kept your word on how Hiei was going to act while with child.Plus its about time everyone else knows about it,I think "uncle Yusuke" has a great ring to it don't you !. It'll be fun having Yusuke babysit hehe picturing him changing a dirty nappy could be a big laugh.Hope you update soon ......nice job

Oh... you're just evil *lol* Ending it there was just mean ^_^ Still, this is a great story! I love your work, so I hope to read more very (VERY) soon! :)