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OMG I am so glad I didn't know you posted chapter 7 till I found chapter 8. They were awesome. Poor Hiei. Kurama will have his work cut out for him giving Hiei his confidence back. update soon.

Great chapter! It needed to be longer! Will the next chapter be longer? I hope so! This fan fiction is so good! Is Toushi going to die? Maybe? And when will the baby (if that's the right word for it) be born? And I'm still hoping it will be a girl. ^_^ Well anyway, great story so far! You have a talent for writing! And please update soon!

Great story!! I think you are a great writer!! please keep on writing!

I'd say its butt kicking time ! And heck yeah Hiei has the right to let it out,he is such a proud
demon that letting Yomi do anything would be betrail to him and make him unworthy of Kurama
in his eyes .Yet I think this is one of the spots for Yusuke to come in and make Hiei feel better about himself and what he went through.Or even more unlikely Kewa but I think he'd take it better from Yusuke.Even injured Hiei may still be the faster of them to get hid blade from Yomi,this could be (and nodoult)will be a great chapter for emtions and blood coming up.
Nice job as always and please update soon

AHHH! Poor Hiei! I feel so bad for him! And it doesn't look like it will be getting better any time soon! Although I saw it coming, I was hoping Yomi might get distracted. I hope the goat bites the dust pretty soon. And I hope eventually Hiei will be emotionally recovered.

Excellent update, and I think another chapter may prevent me for going (further) insane.

You know that I love your writing and this story. Hell, this is what got me started on fanfic and Hiei and Kurama as a couple but I am sad to say that I may have to
stop reading it for a while. Being 7 months pregnant myself, I guess I am just getting to worked up over it. I know that it is just a story but pregnancy does wierd things to a person.
I hope to come back to it after my son is born. Again, you are a wonderful writer and this is a great story. Keep up the outstanding work.

Hiei thinks Kurama's gonna punish him for betraying him. It's so cute when he thinks stuff like that. I will be waiting anxiuosly for the chapter with their confrontation with each other. Will Toushi be killed? I hope not, he's so cute! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update Soon!
Sincerely Mea ^_^
PS- This chapter was great!

I hate you...you realize that, don't you...you vicious little...hurry up! Damn it! If threats of bodily harm would speed things, I'd make them...damn you!

Yomi's back ,not a big surprise and I'm glad you let the others know even though it was under stress to do so.Now at least there's more help for the two because they're gonna need it I think.Nice job on the chapter and I hope you update soon.

PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE ::Crawls to her on hands and knees:: Update soon. OMG I am begging. I wanna know what happens!!!! Please pretty please??? Please??? SOON very very soon!!! Like in the next two days maybe??? ::Throws all kinds of gifts at her feet::