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FANTASTIC! Quite possibly one of the top 10 Kurama/Hiei fic ive ever read!!! i absolutely adore how you made Hiei maternal without emasculating him at all. He's still a bad ass seme about the whole thing. *grins widely* i love this series sooo much!

Okay Yuyu, I finished this one too, suprisingly. I managed to swallow my pride and make it all the way through a male pregnancy fic, you should feel VERY proud of yourself as I usually detest such things. However this I tolerated and dare I say it, even liked. Your grammar has much improved too by the way, I didn't find nearly as many mishaps as I did in your last fic, very nice job. I think there were only two major things that irked me with this story. The first being the necklaces you made for Kurama and Hiei... I am sorry but I can only see the necklaces with the Hiruseki stones on them as bonds for Hiei and Yukina, I am very strict about that feeling. Yukina and Hiei as you must know each have a Hiruseki stone necklace made from the two tear gems that their mother Hina shed upon their birth. I find that symbolism to be quite sacred to those two, so I didn't really enjoy seeing it applied to Kurama. Though te idea of having a bond of that nature was sweet. The only other thing to bother me was your giving Kurama and Hiei's kit a natural Jagan eye. In the name of science that is not possible. Having a Jagan implanted is what could be called "cosmetic surgery" it's not natural for any demon. Other than that though, I must say WOW. You are quite the writer and am impressed very much by your work.

A very nice ending, if I do say so myself! I really like the two way fireplace setup int he master bedroom/bathroom area. And the fact that you made the point that theya re demons, and while sweet and gently is nice at times, I, too, imagine that demons like it rough now and then. The rings and straps and all were an interesting touch. I haven't seen many (if any) fics that illustrate such an outward sign of their...wel...kink. But you did it very nicely.

I really enjoed this story very much. You're a very gifted writer, and I know I will like whatever you write next. Thank you for sharing this with us!

\o/ I luff, I luff!! And amazingly, you pretty much stayed in their character throughout.

wwww good ending, i loved this story! It was so cute, and i love Mpreg. Good job! <3

whoa...it's finished..im...stunned! i was hopeing you'd TRY to squeeze a few more chapters in there, but THIS IS JUST FINE!!! I LOVED IT!! how sweet!! i nearly cried!! AND i will check out No More Secrets...b/c...i loved this story, and the others, sooo...it's only right that i follow it through(besides...i loved it!! and i know i'll like that one just as much!!)

Really, an awesome story, and I can't wait to read the next story. I hope you post all of the stories, I would really like to read every single one of them.

Such a lovely end!! i can´t believe they (well, hiei) gave hiroseki stones to their friends!!But that was really sweet! And the paintings and so many metal rings LoL That was really funny. And it was so great when i read that there is at least six more stories!And that the first one will be tomorrow! That'll be the first thing i'll do tomorrow ^.~

Wow what a finish to a great story.Loved every minute of this sory and look forward to all side stories and/or arcs,can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve for everyone.Hey was that your dream house because boy I would'nt mind living there.What great fun you could have in their bedroom(den) and wow what I'd love to cook up in that kitchen and the pool room(wow to many to chose from)Anyway,nicely done take a bow. :)

I just wanted to say that I love this story and I wanted to say even though they are not really there in the story when will kurama tell his mother that he move and has a mate. I just wanted to know