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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice. very, very nice
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man I still love this story I quite enjoyed the part where she's unsure of wheter to wrestle him down to the bed or die of embarrassment that was such a great line:)
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this was soo good! i loved it !!!
Before I forget, will you ever add a new chappy to Caught? Its a good one too and I want to read more!
Before I forget, will you ever add a new chappy to Caught? Its a good one too and I want to read more!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good lemon. I like Hiei a lot and think there should be more stories of him out there. There are too many Hiei/Kurama, so this one was a yummmy.
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's incorrect, Anon. An incubus is the male version of a succubus, which is female, although I've never seen either portrayed quite this way. I have no idea what you're getting at with the body part thing, but it's definitely not a technical term.
Also, great story! =) Although I haven't seen incubi/succubi used in this way, it is a very inventive way to use a traditional demon, and I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for the story!
Also, great story! =) Although I haven't seen incubi/succubi used in this way, it is a very inventive way to use a traditional demon, and I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for the story!
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOO this was way hoooot I freaking loved it! Her thoughts on that the worst was that he was 3 inches shorter was funny. I really liked how you wrote his thoughts in that hesitating/double lined thing it was great and I really think that was more in character for him your writing style really conveyed this. The line with her on her knees DAMN THAT'S WAY HOT! I really enjoyed this and I think your incubus thing was a good excuse for finally getting some action started.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can we say extra juicy lemon? I love this!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but I think the word you were looking for was succubus. Not INcubus. Incubus is just a female-specific body part.
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed it. I've never seen an incubus used this way but after I read it all it made more sense to me.
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn that one was good. lol
Hiei is just so damn HOT!!!
Hiei is just so damn HOT!!!