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I get tired of reading the same things, the same pairings. But I think you're breaking new grounds with this one, cliche or not. I vote for not because it's going about it in a way I don't often see and if you had't mentioned the word in the first place, I would never have thought 'oh, this is a cliche!'

This deserves all the reviews it can get in my opinion.

Its good stuff. Update soon.

Wow.. this was so very... hot. Bravo for making this. It is an insane pairing, but you made it work for this little one shot. If you plan on bringing either Yusuke or Kurama into the mix, personally my vote would be for Yusuke :). I mean, Yusuke/Yomi/Keiko is just so insane that you have to give it a go, simply on principle. Plus, with the way you have this fic set up, she's already engaged to him...

Again, great job, I love it. But then again, I always love your stuff!

--julie

whoa! i think the pairing more than makes up for the cliche. first time i've seen it. liked all the scientific words you used when in yomi's head. definitely fits with his character imo.

anyway, didn't really think it was NC since they both really seemed to enjoy it. *smirks* and plz continue! i'd love for kurama to be thrown into it! he prbly had a relation with yomi before anyway. it'd be cool.

FABULOUS! I JUS FINISHED WATCHING ALL OF YYH AND YOMI IS MY FAVORITE MALE DEMON AND I LOVE KEIKO AND ITS SO FREAKIN AMAZING THAT THERES ACTUALLY A STORY WRITTEN WITH THEM!

WOO HOOOO!

PLZ CONTINUE! I WANNA SEE MORE YUMMY YOMI!

YEAH!

My, even it does seem cliche to you, I don't think it was at all. This was a very well done story! I hope that you continue with it!

Yes! That held my attention the whole time! I loved it! RecReading for sure!

Oh, Belinda-chan! What a lovely LOVELY one shot! I beg of you to continue this at some point upon your return from vacation and by all means, BRING IN KURAMA! Hehe, but of course, you knew that was who I would vote for, did you not? Hee! Anyway, despite the cliche, your writing made up for it. Actually, it made it not sound cliche at all and I adore you for writing this and please please please keep it up! Stay safe while still on vacation and hopefully we'll chat soon after you return home. The group misses you!!!

Rose-chan

Cliche? It certainly didn't feel like it as I was reading it. You've put a very interesting spin on it and this was such an exciting read! It grabbed and held my attention from beginning to end.

And I definitely hope this isn't the end. By all means continue when you get the chance! I'm interested to see how you make a relationship - if there is going to be one - work between two characters who never met in the series.

Looking forward to more and have a safe trip!